Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 92 "There, A Bit of Magic Hides"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Is he the leprechaun who tosses us virtual certificates and coinage? This is a delightful bit of whimsy--a refreshing twist on the profound (obscure?)metaphors.
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Is he the leprechaun who tosses us virtual certificates and coinage? This is a delightful bit of whimsy--a refreshing twist on the profound (obscure?)metaphors.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Maybe it is and maybe it's not... he's not tellin'! ;) Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Liz! ;) Have an awesome weekend, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Lucy de Welles
Just lovely, Yvette. The first thing that I saw was (omg, "saw" is "was" spelled backwards--just saw that!!!), a pot of gold buried by the wiley leprchaun in the bog at the rainbows end. Even under the surface, the gold is colorful.
Beautiful addition to renga book!
Lucy
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Just lovely, Yvette. The first thing that I saw was (omg, "saw" is "was" spelled backwards--just saw that!!!), a pot of gold buried by the wiley leprchaun in the bog at the rainbows end. Even under the surface, the gold is colorful.
Beautiful addition to renga book!
Lucy
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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He-he... gotta watch the blonde!! ;) :) Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Lucy! ;) Have an awesome weekend, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
Wow!!!
I love how your poem is very short, yet its so fun to read!!! I have not been active on FS much, because my mom banned me from extra screen and reading time (my eyes are giving me too much trouble, starting to hurt from staring at a book or screen for too long).
Yet, here I am, commenting on your poem in secret! I love your writing soo much, and it is always so fun to read!!!!
-Tanvi Pauddar :)
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Wow!!!
I love how your poem is very short, yet its so fun to read!!! I have not been active on FS much, because my mom banned me from extra screen and reading time (my eyes are giving me too much trouble, starting to hurt from staring at a book or screen for too long).
Yet, here I am, commenting on your poem in secret! I love your writing soo much, and it is always so fun to read!!!!
-Tanvi Pauddar :)
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Oh, Tanvi - so good to hear from you, Beautiful Girl - missed that smile! And thank you, THANK YOU for those lovely stars!! ;) :)
I'm glad you've been okay, but remember: all the additional screen time (phone, tablets, and computer) is VERY hard on the eyes and you should be sure that your 'blue light filter' is active on all your devices 24 hours a day -- it will help prevent that eye strain that you're experiencing. :) ;) ;)
Thanx again for my 'secret stars' -- they are WONDERFUL!! Happy Halloween! ;) ;)
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Yep, school's ruining my eyesight! I try to not use too many electronics during the weekends, but problem is, the ONLY thing I do when I have nothing else to do is reading/writing, both which I do on my laptop. But luckily, I'm going to the eye doctor tomorrow, so after that I can use electronics all I want! :)
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Just remember the blue light filter! ;) :) Take care! ;)
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Yep! :)
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is a very wistful presentation. The rainbow, I take it, is the colorful safe of the leprechaun. It is a very magical and beautiful scene and blends well with the words.
Ralf
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This is a very wistful presentation. The rainbow, I take it, is the colorful safe of the leprechaun. It is a very magical and beautiful scene and blends well with the words.
Ralf
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Ralf! ;) Have an awesome weekend, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sankey
This was a good read, beautiful picture and a lovely layout. Well done.
Thanks for a lovely short poem. Hope it all works out for you. Can't find a spag anywhere.
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This was a good read, beautiful picture and a lovely layout. Well done.
Thanks for a lovely short poem. Hope it all works out for you. Can't find a spag anywhere.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Sankey -- always good to hear from you over here! ;) Have an awesome weekend, sir!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for adding to the Renga book. I enjoyed your 5-7-5 and magical picture. I could hear the "babbling" of the brook and the leprachaun! Smiles- Joan
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Thank you for adding to the Renga book. I enjoyed your 5-7-5 and magical picture. I could hear the "babbling" of the brook and the leprachaun! Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Joan! ;) Have an awesome weekend, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A wise Leprechaun knows where to hide his treasure Yvette, inside this beautiful scene where the rainbow meets the brook, a fine ambient post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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A wise Leprechaun knows where to hide his treasure Yvette, inside this beautiful scene where the rainbow meets the brook, a fine ambient post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Dolly! ;) Have an awesome weekend, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I enjoyed reading your poem I found it to be an interesting read.
you captured my attention from the start your words were so sweet.
thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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I enjoyed reading your poem I found it to be an interesting read.
you captured my attention from the start your words were so sweet.
thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Cookie! ;) Have an awesome weekend, my lady!! ;) Yvette
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You do the same stay save and be blessed
Cookie
Comment from Minglement
Lovely imagery, here, my dear friend. It is accompanied by gorgeous artwork, all of which brightened my day. Interesting process you have going on here ;)
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Lovely imagery, here, my dear friend. It is accompanied by gorgeous artwork, all of which brightened my day. Interesting process you have going on here ;)
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Marcia! ;) Have an awesome weekend, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this delightful, whimsical piece about keeping treasure safe. Personification and alliteration lend extra flair.
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this delightful, whimsical piece about keeping treasure safe. Personification and alliteration lend extra flair.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Janice! ;) Have an awesome weekend, my lady!! ;) Yvette