The Secret of Happiness!
A 15 Word Poem; Give, but expect nothing in return132 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
I don't understand. If this is not an acrostic poem, why does the word "Gets" fit so perfectly with your wonderful message. Was it serendipity? I love your message. So many people struggle with happiness. They may not have depression, but they struggle with happiness all the same. To me, a gift implies that there are no expectations of return. That is the key to giving, and as your Seer says, to happiness. Nice job.
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I don't understand. If this is not an acrostic poem, why does the word "Gets" fit so perfectly with your wonderful message. Was it serendipity? I love your message. So many people struggle with happiness. They may not have depression, but they struggle with happiness all the same. To me, a gift implies that there are no expectations of return. That is the key to giving, and as your Seer says, to happiness. Nice job.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from WildWithWords
An excellent entry for the competition. Inspirational pep talk stuff. So hard to give a decent appraisal of such restrictive poetry styles as this but I like what I see.
Best of luck with it.
Bill (WildWithWords)
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An excellent entry for the competition. Inspirational pep talk stuff. So hard to give a decent appraisal of such restrictive poetry styles as this but I like what I see.
Best of luck with it.
Bill (WildWithWords)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
