All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "She Turns the Page"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Patti R.
Nothing less than the full spray of stars will do for this gorgeous sonnet, Sharyn. I can even forgive the brightness of the background, which yes, does perfectly match the dress in the photo!
This is such a well written poem, each word exactly what it needs to be, each line bringing the reader further along in the life cycle.
I might have to do something about Madame Time! She's rushing me...
Patti
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2013
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Nothing less than the full spray of stars will do for this gorgeous sonnet, Sharyn. I can even forgive the brightness of the background, which yes, does perfectly match the dress in the photo!
This is such a well written poem, each word exactly what it needs to be, each line bringing the reader further along in the life cycle.
I might have to do something about Madame Time! She's rushing me...
Patti
Comment Written 04-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2013
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yeah Patti - you must have had your sunnies on and been well prepared, yes? Blessings for your lovely six on this one!! I've only ever written one sonnet before so it's always a giant leap of faith!
Blessings, as always, in brightest of colors!
:)))Sharyn
Comment from Taffspride
I really like this Sharyn. You are so right time passes so quickly.
You have a great rhyming scheme, and good rhythm. The words flow and the message is so clear.
Thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2013
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I really like this Sharyn. You are so right time passes so quickly.
You have a great rhyming scheme, and good rhythm. The words flow and the message is so clear.
Thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 04-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2013
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bless you ann - thank you! :)))S
Comment from Gungalo
It's a great sonnet girl with all eyes turning to the fact our parents must grow old. I really liked these lines:
From birth to death, it seems but naught an age
As Time - she laughs, and simply turns the page.
Wonderfully penned.
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2013
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It's a great sonnet girl with all eyes turning to the fact our parents must grow old. I really liked these lines:
From birth to death, it seems but naught an age
As Time - she laughs, and simply turns the page.
Wonderfully penned.
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2013
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thx so much Gungalo! :)))S
Comment from Opal H.
Whoa - like time is the reader of a book. It goes by as she turns the pages and reads on. Never thought of thing that way! And you are totally right about parents seeming like the All Powerful to kids, then as they get older and the kids grow up, the truth bares itself.
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2013
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Whoa - like time is the reader of a book. It goes by as she turns the pages and reads on. Never thought of thing that way! And you are totally right about parents seeming like the All Powerful to kids, then as they get older and the kids grow up, the truth bares itself.
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2013
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thx Opal! I just posted this one - you're my very first review! :)))S