All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "It Makes Me Happy!"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Titanx9
This is an awesome read that has some wonderful thoughts. You touched upon a subject that folks often come to realize too late. Life and its many tasks should never be so taxing one cannot stop to appreciate the things around them. You said it beautifully. I like these two lines: "and it dawns on me that God's whole world is pulsing in sunlight."
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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This is an awesome read that has some wonderful thoughts. You touched upon a subject that folks often come to realize too late. Life and its many tasks should never be so taxing one cannot stop to appreciate the things around them. You said it beautifully. I like these two lines: "and it dawns on me that God's whole world is pulsing in sunlight."
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Bless you Dossie - crazy how we have to MAKE ourselves sit still for a moment, isn't it? :))
Comment from Jendowoz
I agree, stop and smell the roses occasionally. Appreciate what is right there in your back yard and enjoy every minute. Life's too short to waste. Love the sound of this when I read it aloud.
regards, Jen
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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I agree, stop and smell the roses occasionally. Appreciate what is right there in your back yard and enjoy every minute. Life's too short to waste. Love the sound of this when I read it aloud.
regards, Jen
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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thx Jen - wow, you're on a reviewing bender today, hmm? :)S
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Yes, catching up on my fan reading and reviewing.
love, Jen
Comment from GWinterwin
Pretty words telling of things that make you happy. Your words tell much of what should make us all happy and we sometimes seem to over look. Great writing.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Pretty words telling of things that make you happy. Your words tell much of what should make us all happy and we sometimes seem to over look. Great writing.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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thx so much GW! :)Sharyn
Comment from amahra
Blue is my favorite color to stare upon. But for some reason, I don't wear anything blue if I can help it. Don't know why. Loved you poem. It was very well thought out and written. Loved the image of the bird. And thought the background colors were perfect for this writing.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Blue is my favorite color to stare upon. But for some reason, I don't wear anything blue if I can help it. Don't know why. Loved you poem. It was very well thought out and written. Loved the image of the bird. And thought the background colors were perfect for this writing.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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thx so much amahra! :)Sharyn
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
I loved it! So happy and free spirited! It made ME want to sing. :) Loved "leap deep" , "hey you!" and "stroking me alive".
All of your words so aptly conveyed to the reader what it is that makes you happy. And that captured feeling was contagious. I could feel it! Wonderful imagery!
So well penned and presented. Thanks for sharing this lovely creation Sharyn.
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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I loved it! So happy and free spirited! It made ME want to sing. :) Loved "leap deep" , "hey you!" and "stroking me alive".
All of your words so aptly conveyed to the reader what it is that makes you happy. And that captured feeling was contagious. I could feel it! Wonderful imagery!
So well penned and presented. Thanks for sharing this lovely creation Sharyn.
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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I'm so delighted that you enjoyed dancing down this one with me Connie! Bless you for your lovely six! Happiness to all!
:)Sharyn
Comment from wordsareus
I enjoyed reading about what makes you happy. You are right, that oftentimes it's the simple things. Your poem was a delight to read.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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I enjoyed reading about what makes you happy. You are right, that oftentimes it's the simple things. Your poem was a delight to read.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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thank you so much my dear! :)S
Comment from Deniz22
I hope you won't be offended by this but your beautiful poem made me think of it. Dennis
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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I hope you won't be offended by this but your beautiful poem made me think of it. Dennis
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Dennis, not only am I not offended, I'm flattered. Each of us has a different interpretation of God, and that's just fine. We meet in the middle sometimes, and I love that. He is ... everywhere, in all, in everything ... Blessings, as always - Sharyn
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Comment from allborn66
This is a delightful poem. The form conveys the theme excellently. I like the word choice. The picture is a good match.
Barbara
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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This is a delightful poem. The form conveys the theme excellently. I like the word choice. The picture is a good match.
Barbara
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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thx so much Barbara! :)Sharyn
Comment from Maureen's Pen
YES !!! Love it plus your author notes were brilliant. First we need to stop and look around. Everyone is in super fast mode now a days.
Great submission and well penned as always.
Thanks for sharing your mighty wisdom, and good luck.
Maureen
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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YES !!! Love it plus your author notes were brilliant. First we need to stop and look around. Everyone is in super fast mode now a days.
Great submission and well penned as always.
Thanks for sharing your mighty wisdom, and good luck.
Maureen
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Bless you Maureen! :)S
Comment from Taffspride
It made me happy to read this poem Sharyn. Some one actually asked me the other day what made me happy. My answer was just being alive. How I wish I'd had your delightful poem to read to them.
Your description of the day made me want to sing. So many colors of blue, Not just the blues of the sky, but also of the sea and the day itself. Not a blue day as is sad, but a day of blue and white.
Glorious is the work to describe this well written poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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It made me happy to read this poem Sharyn. Some one actually asked me the other day what made me happy. My answer was just being alive. How I wish I'd had your delightful poem to read to them.
Your description of the day made me want to sing. So many colors of blue, Not just the blues of the sky, but also of the sea and the day itself. Not a blue day as is sad, but a day of blue and white.
Glorious is the work to describe this well written poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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thx so much Ann! So glad you enjoyed this one!! :))s
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