All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Sugared Stars"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Righteous Riter
Wow. The writer does an excellent job of telling this story. The writer paints a picture in the mind of the reader that is so clear that the reader can see this scene without the photo. This is really descriptive and nice.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Wow. The writer does an excellent job of telling this story. The writer paints a picture in the mind of the reader that is so clear that the reader can see this scene without the photo. This is really descriptive and nice.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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thx so much RR! :)Sharyn
Comment from Supe
Nicely done. I have reviewed you before because I recognize your beautiful happy profile picture. What a perfect picture to match your words. I hope you did well in the contest. I enjoyed this alot. I want some ice cream.....lol
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Nicely done. I have reviewed you before because I recognize your beautiful happy profile picture. What a perfect picture to match your words. I hope you did well in the contest. I enjoyed this alot. I want some ice cream.....lol
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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thx so much Supe! :)Sharyn
Comment from lorijean
Your ice cream sounds so delicious, and yet these words are full of expectation, as it melts away, just like the man's heart I think....
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Your ice cream sounds so delicious, and yet these words are full of expectation, as it melts away, just like the man's heart I think....
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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bless you lorijean! :)Sharyn
Comment from Joy Graham
I like this one! This is a super good entry for this contest :) I love the messy ice cream description. They bring their own little romance to this bench that has been around for a while and has seen so many lovers play out their own little romance.
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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I like this one! This is a super good entry for this contest :) I love the messy ice cream description. They bring their own little romance to this bench that has been around for a while and has seen so many lovers play out their own little romance.
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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thx so much Joy! :)Sharyn
Comment from Indie Skreet
glides down the page for a smooth, attractive read. A romantic write which has to be a very strong contender for the competition. wish you best of luck, Indie :)
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glides down the page for a smooth, attractive read. A romantic write which has to be a very strong contender for the competition. wish you best of luck, Indie :)
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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bless you Indie! :)Sharyn