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All Those Puzzling Pieces

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What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?

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Comment from Imn2writingstories
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This can be over whelming as we see the homeless on the corner with signs need money or work for money. Either way we avoid what is so real and could be us in seconds time. We close our eyes and think Oh god is this really what our world has become or do we stop and say; I have some dollars to spare. Which is right and wrong?

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 Comment Written 01-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
    you've got the idea - it IS overwhelming, isn't it? so we do nothing.