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Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Clarify Me God's Words "Dedicated, Thanks to God, God's Appreciation
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Comment from pome lover
All those things you said about God - his being mysterious, but has a plan for mankind, sometimes not answering prayers. His purpose is not always clear; yet He comes in dreams to some -- and so on. Very good.
To me, God is faith. I can't see Him, hear Him or touch Him, but I believe in Him, and that's faith.
Thank you for your heartfelt poem. It's very powerful!
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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All those things you said about God - his being mysterious, but has a plan for mankind, sometimes not answering prayers. His purpose is not always clear; yet He comes in dreams to some -- and so on. Very good.
To me, God is faith. I can't see Him, hear Him or touch Him, but I believe in Him, and that's faith.
Thank you for your heartfelt poem. It's very powerful!
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this good review.
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you're most welcome,
Katharine
Comment from meeshu
this is a very questioning piece of writing, from the zealots who perhaps have too much God, to the non-believers who are deaf, dumb and blind to God. and in the end, God's ways are a mystery. well done, DR. AL.....................meeshu
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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this is a very questioning piece of writing, from the zealots who perhaps have too much God, to the non-believers who are deaf, dumb and blind to God. and in the end, God's ways are a mystery. well done, DR. AL.....................meeshu
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this good review.
Comment from Stephanie Rollins
There is a lot of feeling in this poem! I enjoyed it, and I know you must have put so much time and reflection into this. I look forward to reading more poems from you.
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There is a lot of feeling in this poem! I enjoyed it, and I know you must have put so much time and reflection into this. I look forward to reading more poems from you.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I have also ran into the acrostic being longer than what I could put for the title. That doesn't bother me and I think you did a great job with this. God and I have our ups and downs, I like to think of it as a real relationship that way, and that's just how it is. There will always be things I don't understand. You did a great job
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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I have also ran into the acrostic being longer than what I could put for the title. That doesn't bother me and I think you did a great job with this. God and I have our ups and downs, I like to think of it as a real relationship that way, and that's just how it is. There will always be things I don't understand. You did a great job
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Wabigoon
Litt Dear--
It puzzles me why no one seems to notice the curtain over there to the left Toto is tugging at. It takes a "dog" I guess to see through all the projection of power out into the vast heavens and, I am not sure what, maybe a "juicer" to squeeze all the Word out of the word so you and I don't have any.
Interesting poem, way of putting things. Notice Toto next time, maybe.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Litt Dear--
It puzzles me why no one seems to notice the curtain over there to the left Toto is tugging at. It takes a "dog" I guess to see through all the projection of power out into the vast heavens and, I am not sure what, maybe a "juicer" to squeeze all the Word out of the word so you and I don't have any.
Interesting poem, way of putting things. Notice Toto next time, maybe.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Ben Colder
The poem reminds me of the first commandment spoken. "Let us make man in our image and likeness. Those who are born of the spirit know this. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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The poem reminds me of the first commandment spoken. "Let us make man in our image and likeness. Those who are born of the spirit know this. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Cedar
You have written a true testimony to our God in Heaven. There are many people across our troubled world that simply does not believe in our Lord.
I think that is the primary reason why our world is such turmoil today.
Good luck in the contest...Bill
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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You have written a true testimony to our God in Heaven. There are many people across our troubled world that simply does not believe in our Lord.
I think that is the primary reason why our world is such turmoil today.
Good luck in the contest...Bill
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this good review.
Comment from Boogienights
A well written poem that brings up a lot of questions. Sometimes it's a little hard to follow, a style I'm not used to, but in essence I think what is being related here is that God is many different beings ,to many different people but needs to be worshiped regardless of what he means to you. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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A well written poem that brings up a lot of questions. Sometimes it's a little hard to follow, a style I'm not used to, but in essence I think what is being related here is that God is many different beings ,to many different people but needs to be worshiped regardless of what he means to you. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from --Turtle.
Hi, Alcreator,
I read through your acrostic, contemplation on God, God's words, and will... in a freestyle flow, stream of thought. The tone of each line reflects faith and being moved/ inspired by God.
The topic fits the feel, with a sense of being swept up in abstract emotions made physical.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Hi, Alcreator,
I read through your acrostic, contemplation on God, God's words, and will... in a freestyle flow, stream of thought. The tone of each line reflects faith and being moved/ inspired by God.
The topic fits the feel, with a sense of being swept up in abstract emotions made physical.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the read and good review.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You have indeed fulfilled the required rules for such a poem. First let me ask when you say Knottily do you mean Naughtily? Other than that I see what you are intending to portray. But, really the word of God is very clear. You need only take up the Bible and you will see, especially in the New Testament. They say, meaning Matthew, Mark, Luke and John? God is everywhere, in fact I believe God is air. We need it to survive. I like the many questions; it reveals a very active mind.
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You have indeed fulfilled the required rules for such a poem. First let me ask when you say Knottily do you mean Naughtily? Other than that I see what you are intending to portray. But, really the word of God is very clear. You need only take up the Bible and you will see, especially in the New Testament. They say, meaning Matthew, Mark, Luke and John? God is everywhere, in fact I believe God is air. We need it to survive. I like the many questions; it reveals a very active mind.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019