All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Wildest Rainbows"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a beautiful, fabulously worded piece of writing in the traditional Shakespearean sonnet style. The musicality of the words is very nice. Good rhymes. kudos
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This is a beautiful, fabulously worded piece of writing in the traditional Shakespearean sonnet style. The musicality of the words is very nice. Good rhymes. kudos
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you so much Perp - much appreciated, as always! :)Sharyn
Comment from mikenbel
Thsnk you first of all for the poetry lesson and the skill you display again and again. It is no wonder you are so high in the rankings. This was a good poem - fun with good rhythm.
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Thsnk you first of all for the poetry lesson and the skill you display again and again. It is no wonder you are so high in the rankings. This was a good poem - fun with good rhythm.
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Bless you my dear - so glad you enjoyed this one!
:)Sharyn
Comment from Rondeno
Great sonnet, Sharyn. The octet is crammed with beautiful images, and the pivot really pulls the reader up short ... before sweeping to a courageous, positive conclusion. You wring several emotions out of a mere 14 lines!
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Great sonnet, Sharyn. The octet is crammed with beautiful images, and the pivot really pulls the reader up short ... before sweeping to a courageous, positive conclusion. You wring several emotions out of a mere 14 lines!
Comment Written 05-May-2013
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I had fun with this one Michael - thanks dear! :)S
Comment from GWinterwin
Good poem here, about your thoughts of getting older and what it means. Are so many things we go through, it's hard to have that sensuous part of our love life, that we had when we were younger. With love and understanding of each other, we can still have some pretty hot times. Thank you for sharing.
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Good poem here, about your thoughts of getting older and what it means. Are so many things we go through, it's hard to have that sensuous part of our love life, that we had when we were younger. With love and understanding of each other, we can still have some pretty hot times. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-May-2013
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thx so much GW - hope so! :))Sharyn
Comment from GracieAnn
This poem has dense and unique word combinations that make the reader keep his/her interest successfully. I like the line "Let's breathe each other in, and with each breath,
we'll ride those wildest rainbows ... unto death." Recapturing the life mentioned in the beginning of the poem is possible. GracieAnn
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This poem has dense and unique word combinations that make the reader keep his/her interest successfully. I like the line "Let's breathe each other in, and with each breath,
we'll ride those wildest rainbows ... unto death." Recapturing the life mentioned in the beginning of the poem is possible. GracieAnn
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Comment Written 05-May-2013
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thank you so much GracieAnn! Let's hope so, my dear! :)Sharyn
Comment from amahra
It was a great sonnet. They are my favorite formal poems along with Sestina which I've written. I loved the art work you chose also.
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It was a great sonnet. They are my favorite formal poems along with Sestina which I've written. I loved the art work you chose also.
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Comment Written 05-May-2013
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oh I'm so glad you liked this one amahra! Thank you so much! :)Sharyn