All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "It Makes Me Happy!"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Harlequin
A great and truly thought-provoking piece of poetry that I enjoyed reading very much. Great photo. Well done and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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A great and truly thought-provoking piece of poetry that I enjoyed reading very much. Great photo. Well done and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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thanks Petrarch! :) Sharyn
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OOOOHHHH. Nice. Flows gently. Had a probem with "drifting gentle" . Seemed to stop for me. Did you mean to say gantly? It felt good and free in the piece and I love to drife in someone elses poem. and I drifted
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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OOOOHHHH. Nice. Flows gently. Had a probem with "drifting gentle" . Seemed to stop for me. Did you mean to say gantly? It felt good and free in the piece and I love to drife in someone elses poem. and I drifted
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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actually I said "drifting quiet" Barb, not "gentle" - take another peek dear! :)))S
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I am so sorry. My mind saw something else. And cat running in front of screen does not help.
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Im sorry, I meant quietly.. guess it is too early for me. Paying attention to the cat and trying to concentrate I have trouble chewing gum and walking . Ha
Comment from robina1978
A catching title and nice picture of this white bird. You are so lucky to have so many things that make you happy. I wished I had. I consider it to be a free style poem as it sound so great.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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A catching title and nice picture of this white bird. You are so lucky to have so many things that make you happy. I wished I had. I consider it to be a free style poem as it sound so great.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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thx Ine! :))S
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very welcome, Ine
Comment from N.K. Wagner
You've painted blue and white pictures to keep us happy all day - right along with you, Sharyn. Love and happiness and beauty. Your poem shares it all. :) nancy
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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You've painted blue and white pictures to keep us happy all day - right along with you, Sharyn. Love and happiness and beauty. Your poem shares it all. :) nancy
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Bless you, nancy - so glad you enjoyed this one! :)Sharyn
Comment from juliedickson55
Yes!
it definitely comes alive when read aloud- hey you!
Cool and interesting poem, grateful for little days, for coffee, a blue sky and to be loved.
This is a nice one, Sharyn. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Yes!
it definitely comes alive when read aloud- hey you!
Cool and interesting poem, grateful for little days, for coffee, a blue sky and to be loved.
This is a nice one, Sharyn. Nicely done.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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thx so much Julie! :)))S
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Sharyn,
once again I can't pry the smile from my face, only this time it's from the pure joy you give me reading your appreciation of the beauty that surrounds you.
I was waiting for the cast of hundreds to come out and start singing as I could hear you reciting this with the passion you wrote it with, just love your spirit and the lovely lady that's attached.
If I have a six left for you this month you will see it shining along with the happiness you bring to all that feels your soul, magic!!!
kindest respect,
James xx
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Hi Sharyn,
once again I can't pry the smile from my face, only this time it's from the pure joy you give me reading your appreciation of the beauty that surrounds you.
I was waiting for the cast of hundreds to come out and start singing as I could hear you reciting this with the passion you wrote it with, just love your spirit and the lovely lady that's attached.
If I have a six left for you this month you will see it shining along with the happiness you bring to all that feels your soul, magic!!!
kindest respect,
James xx
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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What a sweetheart! I'm so glad you "got" this piece, James - I knew you would because I sense you're able to key into the beauty that's around you. Bless you for saving a wonderful six for me!!! Now I'm even happier! yeah!!! :)Sharyn
Comment from MizKat
Sharyn - I guess I forgot that you like your poetry read aloud. It sounded great reading it silently though. You sure come up with good ideas. Kat
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Sharyn - I guess I forgot that you like your poetry read aloud. It sounded great reading it silently though. You sure come up with good ideas. Kat
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Kat, YOU don't have to read it aloud if you don't want to dear - it's just that I'm a performer, so I love to write poetry that sounds musical to my ear. We're not going to put you at the bottom of the class if you prefer simply to read it my dear! :)Sharyn
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You're so cute. I got a bang out of you're little note. It's about time for me to try to get a couple of hours shut eye. I've been up all night as usual. Kat
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me too Kat ... zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Comment from twinklepoems
It'salways good to be present in the moment.I love your word choices and how many different words that you used such as fizzing, popping and dropping. I also liked all your different words and shades of blue. You remind us to enjoy and be happy in the simplicity around us. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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It'salways good to be present in the moment.I love your word choices and how many different words that you used such as fizzing, popping and dropping. I also liked all your different words and shades of blue. You remind us to enjoy and be happy in the simplicity around us. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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thx so much twinks! :)Sharyn
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wonderful! So many of those same things make me happy too. Without my hubby and this beautiful world (awaaaayyy from cities, that is) life would be so drab.
By the way, Evil Eddie got to your formatting. Retype those symbols in the post and they'll come back looking normal.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Wonderful! So many of those same things make me happy too. Without my hubby and this beautiful world (awaaaayyy from cities, that is) life would be so drab.
By the way, Evil Eddie got to your formatting. Retype those symbols in the post and they'll come back looking normal.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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God - I can't see anything from my end - I deleted it and re-entered the whole damned thing Phyllis - would you mind taking another peek please? :)Sharyn
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It's fine now. Could be a diff in browsers. I'll let you know if it ever happens again.
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Bless you Phyllis - thanks so much. You weren't the only one to comment on it. Weird, because nothing showed up on my end! GRRR!
Comment from Opal H.
Aaah... The joys of everyday life. The little things that often fail to get noticed, but bring us so much joy if we so notice them. What a lovely colorful poem! Just one thing - there are a whole bunch of random question marks throughout the poem.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Aaah... The joys of everyday life. The little things that often fail to get noticed, but bring us so much joy if we so notice them. What a lovely colorful poem! Just one thing - there are a whole bunch of random question marks throughout the poem.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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the FS editing program had a blast with my piece Opal - and I can't see it from my end - would you mind taking another peek please? I deleted and re-entered the whole thing. :)S
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And poof... They're gone. ;)
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thx for checking Opal! I re-entered the whole damned thing! :)S