How This Critter Crits
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Micro-Critter and the Eavesdropper"GROWTH? ADULATION? HURRY -- CHOOSE!
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Comment from Donaya Haymond
Goodly good with good goodness. Sorry, I have been waiting to unload that atrocious, unhelpful statement upon someone, since I cannot crit with any skill. I see no errors.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2007
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Goodly good with good goodness. Sorry, I have been waiting to unload that atrocious, unhelpful statement upon someone, since I cannot crit with any skill. I see no errors.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2007
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Raven, Raven, Raven ... so goodly good to hear your voice. Thank you for reading this segment. I always appreciate your comments.
Jay
Comment from calamity_candy
well written writing
all elements very well expressed and presented, i like the all sentences and thoughts very moving
i see no error thanks!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2007
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well written writing
all elements very well expressed and presented, i like the all sentences and thoughts very moving
i see no error thanks!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2007
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Thank you very much, Calamity_Candy for you kind words. I hope you stay aboard for the entire series. You might want to pick up the previous chapters.
Jay
Comment from Killer Headache
Very informative... I see no errors, I like what you have to say. I am always curious as to the opinions of others when it comes to content and outline of writing whether short bits or novels.
Good Read! Not a waste of time at all!
Two thumbs up!
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2007
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Very informative... I see no errors, I like what you have to say. I am always curious as to the opinions of others when it comes to content and outline of writing whether short bits or novels.
Good Read! Not a waste of time at all!
Two thumbs up!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2007
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Hi Killer... Thanks for your kind words. Hope you stay aboard for the rest of them.
Jay
Comment from tecate
It's about time I caught up to you...hope all is well...your informational writing is still on the silicon edge and just what 90 percent of us need to really pay attention to. The other 10 percent wouldn't know what to do with your illumination anyway...Keep it up!!! Tecate
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2007
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It's about time I caught up to you...hope all is well...your informational writing is still on the silicon edge and just what 90 percent of us need to really pay attention to. The other 10 percent wouldn't know what to do with your illumination anyway...Keep it up!!! Tecate
Comment Written 19-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2007
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Thank You, thank you, thank you, Tecate, for your kindness and also the sixes. I'm so glad you did catch up with me. I've been around, but kinda on the outskirts of things while I worked on this chapter. The next should be out in 2 to 3 weeks. How's your Cortes saga going?
Jay