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Little Granddaughters

An Abecdarian Poem about my granddaughters.

9 total reviews 
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, anonymous,

I have two granddaughters that I love very much. I love the topic.

Great entry for the Abecdarian Poem writing prompt contest. The whole alphabet! Wow, that is something to be proud about. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2020

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    Thank you for reviewing and the many stars.
Comment from Margaret Bednar
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A nice and sweet list Abecdarian poem. Every word near and dear to a grandmother's heart. I wonder if creative license was used for their names :).

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2020

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    That is actually their names. Thank you for reviewing and the many stars.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Abecdarian Poem writing prompt.
This flows smoothly and you've described your granddaughter to us.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2020

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    Thank you for reviewing and the many stars.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Abecdarian poem about your lovely granddaughters who are full of life and energy and a joy to a grand mother who e very proud of her previous grand daughters.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2020

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    Thank you for reviewing and the many stars.
Comment from RodG
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I am impressed with the portrait you have drawn of your granddaughters in this Abecdarian poem. We get a glimpse of what their personalities are like and how much they're loved by everyone. Rod

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2020

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    Thank you for reviewing and the many stars.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Granny wonderful angels that brought her inspiration to write a poem and dropped in this contest. It's true that our kid's children are getting the best in us

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2020

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    Thank you for reviewing and the many stars.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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(Do you realize you classified this as prose? Makes no difference to me, just saying) This is delightful--hadn't even realized it was alphabetical--nice job! Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
    Thank you for pointing that out and for the review and many stars.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Writing this type of poem is not easy but you managed not only to get the words to complete the poem but introduce your reader to two sweet fun loving little girls.
Well done job. I enjoyed your writing.

Good luck in the contest.
Regards,

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2020

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    Thank you for reviewing and the many stars.
Comment from LisaMay
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Your enjoyable poem is a delightful glimpse into your family bond with young ones - lovely descriptions of their personalities and your pride in them (Because they are mine - Yeah! ). Nice to read that they are so close to each other also (Sleeping entwined).

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
    Thank you for reviewing and the many stars.