Clink
Senryu4 total reviews
Comment from Loren .
This is well done and presents a picture and indeed a dilemma of what just might unfold in the days ahead. To be honest, I don't think I'll miss the clinking, but I'm not without it yet. Loren
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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This is well done and presents a picture and indeed a dilemma of what just might unfold in the days ahead. To be honest, I don't think I'll miss the clinking, but I'm not without it yet. Loren
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, Clink, presented as a 5-7-5, suggests that the use of credit and cryto-currency will likely lead us to a changeless society.
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This senryu, Clink, presented as a 5-7-5, suggests that the use of credit and cryto-currency will likely lead us to a changeless society.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from mermaids
Your words pay tribute to our coins which are presently in short supply. I like how your poem opens with a question and then describes how our history is changing. Excellent use of words that is relevant to today.
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Your words pay tribute to our coins which are presently in short supply. I like how your poem opens with a question and then describes how our history is changing. Excellent use of words that is relevant to today.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Tina Crute
I am giving this a six for these reasons...I love the title's simplicity. It made me curious! The picture's movement is key to the reader "hearing" the clink while reading the poem. Great technique! Phrasing the poem as a question seems to make the poem stick in my head a bit. We all have questions about the future of coins, as we do other issues. I would not be surprised if you did well in the contest:)
Tina
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I am giving this a six for these reasons...I love the title's simplicity. It made me curious! The picture's movement is key to the reader "hearing" the clink while reading the poem. Great technique! Phrasing the poem as a question seems to make the poem stick in my head a bit. We all have questions about the future of coins, as we do other issues. I would not be surprised if you did well in the contest:)
Tina
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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A superb review and thanks again for 6 beautiful stars zanya
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