Summer Bliss
Cool breezes on a hot day bring happiness.2 total reviews
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
A nice lantern! And a well-chosen illustration to the text. I can see the breeze playing with her hair. And the white summerdress indicates the hot day. Maybe the last word of the poem should better be "days"?
Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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A nice lantern! And a well-chosen illustration to the text. I can see the breeze playing with her hair. And the white summerdress indicates the hot day. Maybe the last word of the poem should better be "days"?
Well done!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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I will consider the suggestion, thanks so much for the read and comments.
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Welcome to the review.
Comment from Adam Graham
Yes indeed they are! As someone currently working outside in 105 degree heat this piece was a nice moment to read while cooling off inside. The piece itself reflects that feeling of the cooling breeze. Quite welcome to read!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Yes indeed they are! As someone currently working outside in 105 degree heat this piece was a nice moment to read while cooling off inside. The piece itself reflects that feeling of the cooling breeze. Quite welcome to read!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thanks much for the read, review and comments.