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Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Oh, please, please can I join him?! ;) :) A lovely 'follow on' here, June -- wish that we could read the 'compiled book' as a single post once in a while to really get a feel for the changing winds throughout without having to do all the 'clicking'... lol!! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thanks for reading and reviewing this chapter in the Renga book - we could all use a little contentment right about now.
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for adding your couplet to this Renga. The eye-catching artwork you selected made me want to purr! Your words captured the "pure contentment" so well. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
    Contentment is what we all aim for - amidst all the chaos these days!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job with your renga, June. Your words are descriptive and the image is adorable. You are describing my kitties to a 't'.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for your positive and encouraging feedback!
Comment from Mark D. R.
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June,

This is another good addition to this renga collaboration. Your selected cat embodies your few 7-7 verse - a very nice overall presentation.

Mark

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Glad you liked this fun little piece on a contented kitty!
Comment from Sugarray77
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Awww... June, this is so precious. I am behind on this add a chapter project, but your lovely and adorable verse is a real plus for any writing endeavor. The artwork is just as cuddly as your fine words. Well done.

Melissa

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    So glad you liked this one - that kitten is so cute! This book of Renga has quite a variety of themes. I enjoy contributing.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, June,

Thank you for adding another chapter in our renga book. The couplet is adorable. Good syllable count and connection between lines.

all cozy, warm and fuzzy
picture of pure contentment

Your couplet goes well with my 5/7/5 and takes a turn to pets and away from babies :) is so cool to see the renga grow. Well done.

Hugs,

Gypsy

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Glad you liked this one. Thought it went well with the theme of the previous chapter on a life well lived...leading to contentment. Even for animals!
Comment from roof35
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You followed the rules and penned a lovely five/seven/five poem. You illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. This is nicely done.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    I thought this kitten was the perfect picture of contentment!