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"The Gift of Life."

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True storiesof life loss and tragedy in this world

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Comment from John bailey
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Doctor Rick you have once again caused my heart to mourn your loss, as though it was yesterday,because yesterday never ends,until God calls his spirit and his soul home .yes he now travels with Angels, because what belongs to God will soar and God will call us ready or not. thank you Doctor Rick.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
    Thanks again John I've come to accept that exact reason why my son passed.
    Ricky
reply by John bailey on 27-Aug-2020
    you are a strong man Doctor Rick, most would have given up.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    Strength is only a figure of mind and a word sometime sad sometimes kind?
    24.
reply by John bailey on 29-Aug-2020
    I have followed you, doctor Rick and will grieve with you.
Comment from mermaids
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You have a strong steady beat in your words. The reader can feel the soul being free. I like your last paragraph about donation of body parts, yes these people are truly angels.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
    I tend to think there's always a good reason for the bad.
    In this case to save four lives.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Let there be Light: "...
"So the next time you see or think of an Angel...
'An Angel from Above...
'A Gifting Angel from Above!'
'Realize they gave and made the most Generous Sacrifice...
'And, gave all of their **Love..." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
    Thanks for your thoughtful reply Iza.
    And, have a blessed rest of your week.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Royette Dickenson
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This poem is interesting something to think about. It's a little on the lengthy side but it's nice. It takes us on a real journey of getting to know ourselves and accepting ourselves and realising our true potential. It also looks at life in general. Life situations are not always pleasant !

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
    Yes I tend to get lengthy and I tend to go on journeys and I tend to get extremely deep.
    Thanks Royette.
    Ricky
Comment from equestrik
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This is well done and you make your point with a poem that has a nice flow. In the second line of the fourth stanza, I think you mean few, not feel. It is a good write though religion is not really my thing.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
    Thanks again equestrik.
    Ricky...
Comment from Jg
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Poetic craft in literature , is what this chapter is to me . I'm motivated to read the previous chapters to get a further gist of the book. Nonetheless it's a good piece of literature. Well done

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
    When it comes to that word,
    "Literature"
    And in a literal sense?
    Menza ranked me above genius.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Ayan3
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That was an amazing story and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this story.

Sincerely, Ayan

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
    Well I appreciate your first time Avan.
    And thanks forever for your amazing review of my work.
    And, thank you immensely for this!
    Doctor Ricky 1024