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Attempt to control another leads to disappointment.

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Comment from Ayan3
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That was an amazing piece of writing and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this writing.

Sincerely, Ayan

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
    Thanks for the read and encouraging comment.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made excellent use of your thirty-four syllables in this well-written piece. I've always heard so many stories about women trying to exert too much control over men. It's good to hear the other side of the coin! :-)

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
    Thanks for your read and comment.