A Simple Truth
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Comment from writer723
I like your poem. It makes a powerful statement using so few words. Your words remind me of the Black Panther days. The picture you used is a nice compliment also.
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I like your poem. It makes a powerful statement using so few words. Your words remind me of the Black Panther days. The picture you used is a nice compliment also.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Sad but true. The only way you can guarantee it is to be elected by the people. Once elected you must earn trust. Buying it is tenuous and can only last temporarily. Rioting is useless and destructive. When will we learn?
Ralf
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Sad but true. The only way you can guarantee it is to be elected by the people. Once elected you must earn trust. Buying it is tenuous and can only last temporarily. Rioting is useless and destructive. When will we learn?
Ralf
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have used your ten syllables effectively to convey a powerful, timely, universal TRUTH. Good intentions and being undeniably right won't get you anywhere unless you are powerful. There's power in numbers.
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You have used your ten syllables effectively to convey a powerful, timely, universal TRUTH. Good intentions and being undeniably right won't get you anywhere unless you are powerful. There's power in numbers.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
Comment from Beverly A McBride
This poem is self explainatory, I think. Yes. If you don't have it, you want it, eh? Yes. you are right. You can't get around it. Good luck with the contest.
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This poem is self explainatory, I think. Yes. If you don't have it, you want it, eh? Yes. you are right. You can't get around it. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
