Your Real Miss America.
May We Have Your Attention Please...Introducing...4 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker
Rhonnie, do you mean Joe Biden's Vice President choice? If so, I hope they win. She's bright and gutsy and young! I like your strong words. I am voting this year for these two. Thank you for the beautiful poem.
Ronnie, I liked your letter; I look forward to your poems because they're bright, cheerful, serious and informative. They always bring a smile to my face.ð?¥´
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Rhonnie, do you mean Joe Biden's Vice President choice? If so, I hope they win. She's bright and gutsy and young! I like your strong words. I am voting this year for these two. Thank you for the beautiful poem.
Ronnie, I liked your letter; I look forward to your poems because they're bright, cheerful, serious and informative. They always bring a smile to my face.ð?¥´
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
Dear Rhonnie, know that not all white people hate people for the color of their skin. Hispanics, Jews, Muslims, Asians, Japanese, Indians, are all God's children. Our skin color or our origin had nothing to do with our ability to love. I don't know if you are aware, but during WW2 the Japanese Americans were put in concentration camps. They were stripped of all their posessions, businesses, and put in homes, behind fences. Our country is not perfect, and has made a lot of mistakes, ie: especially the original Americans, the Indians. This was their land, and what we did to them is absolutely uncomprehenceable. .
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Dear Rhonnie, know that not all white people hate people for the color of their skin. Hispanics, Jews, Muslims, Asians, Japanese, Indians, are all God's children. Our skin color or our origin had nothing to do with our ability to love. I don't know if you are aware, but during WW2 the Japanese Americans were put in concentration camps. They were stripped of all their posessions, businesses, and put in homes, behind fences. Our country is not perfect, and has made a lot of mistakes, ie: especially the original Americans, the Indians. This was their land, and what we did to them is absolutely uncomprehenceable. .
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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HELLO BECKY: I thank you for your informative review. I learned something from you, my friend. You are appreciated. Becky, when I borrowed the illustration picture from FanStory Art, that's the way they presented it. I used it as it was. I used it because of the color of the lady and the color of her dress. The other people represent, "ANY," and. "ALL," other protesters. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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Thank you for writing back and keep your hobby? of writing up, you are very talented.
Comment from oliver818
This is a nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. I like the way you build up to the climax , it s well done. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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This is a nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. I like the way you build up to the climax , it s well done. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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HELLO OLIVER: I thank you for your review. You are appreciated. God bless. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Vanna1
What is with the repeated the. I can't make it out...a stutter? Maybe a typo I think. If not you should punctuate. I really like your theme it is deep, meaningful, and relevant to today.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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What is with the repeated the. I can't make it out...a stutter? Maybe a typo I think. If not you should punctuate. I really like your theme it is deep, meaningful, and relevant to today.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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HELLO VANNA1: I thank you for your review. You are appreciated. I'm glad that you liked my work. For your information...the double, "THE THE," was a typo. I thank you for pointing that out for me. I edited that and corrected it. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.