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Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Swimming in Blue Sin"
Children Stories from the Heart.

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Comment from michele will
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It is probably my own failings in not being able to follow the thread of what i have read here, but honesty is probably best. I was almost coward when i hesitated on whether or not to tell you that i don't understand. If sin is within how can one feel light? as a child you rushed into sin and through forgetfulness realized the quest of completion.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
    I'll have to put the second part and I forgot about it.
    That will explain basically what it is.
    Basically it's based on my 18 year old son who got killed in a car accident on Match 31st, 2003.
    Brain Dead and Vomatosed, we decided to donated Jason's organs.
    (April Fool's Day)
    Thanks, Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Ben B.
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I don't get it. This is LITERALLY a bunch of nonsense. Is this supposed to be a code or something? I read the previous chapter and I still have no idea what this even means.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
    you caught this when I was trying to post it to save my position cuz it was 2 minutes to midnight in your only allowed to post twice a day it's now been written but it's in a continuation
    You can go back to it now and read what's been posted.
    Doctor Ricky 1024