Darkness
The Dark contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
"Clearly what happened, I passed out in the Porta-John and those sorry friends of mine just left me here." And that is just the beginning of a torrid tale probably never to be told. I don;t want to begin to think of 'why' you are naked in a porta-john at a concert? and your only worry is that your frineds left you?
I believe you have met the requirements of The Dark writing contest: Write a story where your character is stuck in complete darkness. Fiction only.
Best of luck with the The Dark writing contest.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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"Clearly what happened, I passed out in the Porta-John and those sorry friends of mine just left me here." And that is just the beginning of a torrid tale probably never to be told. I don;t want to begin to think of 'why' you are naked in a porta-john at a concert? and your only worry is that your frineds left you?
I believe you have met the requirements of The Dark writing contest: Write a story where your character is stuck in complete darkness. Fiction only.
Best of luck with the The Dark writing contest.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous starts, R. Sorry about the late reply. My internet has been down for a few days. I didn't want to say that he wondered why his pants were around his ankles as that might have given it away. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a good one.
Ron
Comment from humpwhistle
Hmm, this is a very Old Testament sort of depiction. The end gives me the impression that God has a sense of irony.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
The instant I wake up, I'm in total darkness.--Chances are, you were in total darkness even before you woke up. Stands to reason, doesn't it?
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Hmm, this is a very Old Testament sort of depiction. The end gives me the impression that God has a sense of irony.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
The instant I wake up, I'm in total darkness.--Chances are, you were in total darkness even before you woke up. Stands to reason, doesn't it?
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Lol. Yes, that would be the case but I didn't want to give it all away before the end. Contest rules and all. Haha. Thank you for the great review and stars, Lee. Have a great weekend.
Comment from elchupakabra
I like this short contest entry about darkness, it works as a large metaphor overall. I really enjoyed the piece, really great work and thank you for sharing. Best of luck in the contest. Later daze.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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I like this short contest entry about darkness, it works as a large metaphor overall. I really enjoyed the piece, really great work and thank you for sharing. Best of luck in the contest. Later daze.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review and generous stars, Daze. I'm glad you liked this dark piece. Have a great weekend.