A Challenging Environment
5-7-5 about politics16 total reviews
Comment from UpNorth
Wonderful double (triple?) entandre. And it is so true in the civilian population and entrenched political hacks and other government departments. Good thinking ood writing.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Wonderful double (triple?) entandre. And it is so true in the civilian population and entrenched political hacks and other government departments. Good thinking ood writing.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for your appreciation of my poem.
Comment from Mia Twysted
This is so very true. There are so many fights and disagreements when it comes to oil. And the one that is but on the back burner is how it is bad for the world we live in, the world that supports us and provides is with a home.
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This is so very true. There are so many fights and disagreements when it comes to oil. And the one that is but on the back burner is how it is bad for the world we live in, the world that supports us and provides is with a home.
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This political 5-7-5, A Challenging Environment, has the proper formatting and alludes to the issues of green house gases and the struggle between money and survival.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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This political 5-7-5, A Challenging Environment, has the proper formatting and alludes to the issues of green house gases and the struggle between money and survival.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Good syllable count and connection between lines. The presentation is nice.
Biden has an environment plan, Trump thinks it's a hoax.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Good syllable count and connection between lines. The presentation is nice.
Biden has an environment plan, Trump thinks it's a hoax.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Trump is a waste of a brain. Does he even have one? Biden is on the right track. It is utterly obvious an environment plan is critically necessary.
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I agree with you.
Comment from Monica Chaddick
I like the art work you selected. It is such a shame that we are poisoning our environment the way we do. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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I like the art work you selected. It is such a shame that we are poisoning our environment the way we do. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thanks for reviewing. Too much talk and not enough action to look after Mother Earth.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This poem entry is well written and thought out. It should do well as an entry for the Political 5-7-5 writing prompt. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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This poem entry is well written and thought out. It should do well as an entry for the Political 5-7-5 writing prompt. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your encouraging comments.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree with your statements here and we had pretty much the same scenario in Britain, but it was clear that we could not let Jeremy Corbin as it would have been political suicide, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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I so agree with your statements here and we had pretty much the same scenario in Britain, but it was clear that we could not let Jeremy Corbin as it would have been political suicide, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an interesting and original twist to the concept of politics. It appeals to me very much, especially how you managed to carry through so many alternative points on the subject.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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This is an interesting and original twist to the concept of politics. It appeals to me very much, especially how you managed to carry through so many alternative points on the subject.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your encouraging comments.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I noticed a half-rhyme with air/atmosphere in this 5-7-5 that has more than one level of interpretation. Nice job on incorporating double meanings and fitting it to a political/environmental slant as well.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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I noticed a half-rhyme with air/atmosphere in this 5-7-5 that has more than one level of interpretation. Nice job on incorporating double meanings and fitting it to a political/environmental slant as well.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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I'm pleased you noticed the near-rhyme. i thought its subtlety might be missed. Thanks for your comments.
Comment from papa55mike
They have taken down a bunch of those old coal furnaces, but many remain. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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They have taken down a bunch of those old coal furnaces, but many remain. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thanks for reviewing.
Under lockdown, with minimal car useage, the air cleared noticeably in a relatively short timeframe. We could help the Earth heal overall with the right mindset and political will.
