Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Hurricane Survivor"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from S. H. Berman
I love how how even though the poem is short, it has beautiful, well chosen wording. The title of your poem is also genius. You did a really amazing job!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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I love how how even though the poem is short, it has beautiful, well chosen wording. The title of your poem is also genius. You did a really amazing job!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much
Comment from Eternal Muse
Another superb Renga with terrific creative imagery and visuals. Enjoyed your artistic pesentation and artwork.
Berries ripen and birds wait
This line is incredible!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Another superb Renga with terrific creative imagery and visuals. Enjoyed your artistic pesentation and artwork.
Berries ripen and birds wait
This line is incredible!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank yo so much!
Comment from roof35
This is a lovely couplet to match your lovely illustration and follow your previous poem. What else can I say about two lines? This is very nicely done.
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This is a lovely couplet to match your lovely illustration and follow your previous poem. What else can I say about two lines? This is very nicely done.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from rama devi
It's so interesting to see this collective book...and you're addition is a good one, prompting anticipation! good phonics in phrasing. I like the personification in line one. Well done.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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It's so interesting to see this collective book...and you're addition is a good one, prompting anticipation! good phonics in phrasing. I like the personification in line one. Well done.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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I appreciate your encouraging and insightful feedback, as always.
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Thanks...I joined the book too, just now!
Hugs, rd
Comment from Bill Schott
This addition to the renga keeps the berries in view as the weather seems to be taking a turn from the intense to fair skies.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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This addition to the renga keeps the berries in view as the weather seems to be taking a turn from the intense to fair skies.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Glad you are following along with this Renga project!
Comment from Jade Evans
This was a lovely read.. I enjoyed your use of colours.
The picture really helps make your poem stand out.
I was instantly drawn to it.
Thank you for sharing your poem
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This was a lovely read.. I enjoyed your use of colours.
The picture really helps make your poem stand out.
I was instantly drawn to it.
Thank you for sharing your poem
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written couplet to follow after the initial 5-7-5 poem from Gypsy Rose that will become a great poem from different poets combined to complete the Renga.
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A very well-written couplet to follow after the initial 5-7-5 poem from Gypsy Rose that will become a great poem from different poets combined to complete the Renga.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the positive and encouraging feedback!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great continuation of the previous poem, June. Your image is a good choice with your precise word choice. Your two lines make a good statement about nature and how it continues despite any/all changes or difficulties--nothing will stop it from evolving. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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This is a great continuation of the previous poem, June. Your image is a good choice with your precise word choice. Your two lines make a good statement about nature and how it continues despite any/all changes or difficulties--nothing will stop it from evolving. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the positive and encouraging feedback!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello June!
I loved your couplet as it speaks to the continuation and perseverance of life after tragedy. Hoping my contribution resonates as much as yours does.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Hello June!
I loved your couplet as it speaks to the continuation and perseverance of life after tragedy. Hoping my contribution resonates as much as yours does.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your response to Gypsy Blue Rose's Renga. I admired the descriptions of the "berries" and the "birds" and the reinforcing artwork. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thank you for sharing your response to Gypsy Blue Rose's Renga. I admired the descriptions of the "berries" and the "birds" and the reinforcing artwork. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Glad you liked this piece. I enjoyed contributing towards the Tenga book.