Enchanted World
Dreaming in the misted morning12 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Enchanted World
by Marjon van Bruggen
Hello, Marjon,
How nice to feel like a fairy. I like the concept of silence has a voice. I love your presentation too. Well done.
reply by the author on 31-May-2020
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Enchanted World
by Marjon van Bruggen
Hello, Marjon,
How nice to feel like a fairy. I like the concept of silence has a voice. I love your presentation too. Well done.
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 31-May-2020
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Thanks a lot for the review.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Marjon, this poem has so many lovely moments, each one making me stops to favor it.
My favorite line "At dawn silence has a voice" only starts the parade of stopping places to just absorb this poem as it wanders into wonderful places.
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Dear Marjon, this poem has so many lovely moments, each one making me stops to favor it.
My favorite line "At dawn silence has a voice" only starts the parade of stopping places to just absorb this poem as it wanders into wonderful places.
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Wow, Suzanna, thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from estory
I loved the opening. "At dawn, silence has a voice, swirls of mist subdue all colors" that creates this sense of mystery, of possibility, of endless possibilities. It is a great poem told in a personal voice about imagination and the endless expanse of it that unfolds each morning. There is a sense of hope there, that anything can happen. We can redeem ourselves again. estory
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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I loved the opening. "At dawn, silence has a voice, swirls of mist subdue all colors" that creates this sense of mystery, of possibility, of endless possibilities. It is a great poem told in a personal voice about imagination and the endless expanse of it that unfolds each morning. There is a sense of hope there, that anything can happen. We can redeem ourselves again. estory
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Thanks, Estory. A nice review.
Comment from Alchera
"At dawn
silence has a voice,
swirls of mist subdue all colors."
I love it! The colourful speaking morning silence is really true. It talks from the abyssal depth of our conscience and does travel on far-off desolate shores where our free spirit interweaves the best poetical wastes. Blessings. Tony
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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"At dawn
silence has a voice,
swirls of mist subdue all colors."
I love it! The colourful speaking morning silence is really true. It talks from the abyssal depth of our conscience and does travel on far-off desolate shores where our free spirit interweaves the best poetical wastes. Blessings. Tony
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Thanks, Tony, for this abundant review!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the early morning hours that are always the best time of the day. Refreshed after a good night's sleep we feel energized and the beautiful hues in the skies make it all worthwhile.
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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A very well-written poem about the early morning hours that are always the best time of the day. Refreshed after a good night's sleep we feel energized and the beautiful hues in the skies make it all worthwhile.
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Thank you, Sandra, for the review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Fortunately, you dreamt and felt like a fairy in the lovely, sweet, colourful and hazy morning you did not like to wake; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Fortunately, you dreamt and felt like a fairy in the lovely, sweet, colourful and hazy morning you did not like to wake; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Thank you so much for the review!
Comment from amada
You have a collection of gems here: swirls of subdued colors, swirls of mist...etc. I know, mornings are the best time to allow inspiration into our hearts. I like a lot this poem.
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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You have a collection of gems here: swirls of subdued colors, swirls of mist...etc. I know, mornings are the best time to allow inspiration into our hearts. I like a lot this poem.
Comment Written 29-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Thans, Amada, for the review.
Comment from royowen
Sometimes there are "moments" in our lives thst we would just like to soak in the warm waters of that moment, like a wonderful dream one wakes up from, and we can't go back to it, because the cold light of day prevents us. Beautifully written, thank you for this little gem. Well done Marjon, thank you for this, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Sometimes there are "moments" in our lives thst we would just like to soak in the warm waters of that moment, like a wonderful dream one wakes up from, and we can't go back to it, because the cold light of day prevents us. Beautifully written, thank you for this little gem. Well done Marjon, thank you for this, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 29-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Thanks, Roy, for the lovely review.
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Most welcome
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:))
Comment from richie b
Marjon,
I just woke from a nap when I read your poem. I felt
what your words were saying. There is an enchanting
feeling when first being aroused from sleep. Your poem
captured the bliss of a peaceful rest.
Your poem is well written, sophisticated and promotes
wonderful imagery.
Blessings
Richie
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Marjon,
I just woke from a nap when I read your poem. I felt
what your words were saying. There is an enchanting
feeling when first being aroused from sleep. Your poem
captured the bliss of a peaceful rest.
Your poem is well written, sophisticated and promotes
wonderful imagery.
Blessings
Richie
Comment Written 29-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Thanks, Richie. See how I changes by the day?
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Your writing skills knows
no bounds!
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Richie, thanks so much. But it is not true. I learned and can write classical form rhyming poetry, but it costs me blood, sweat and tears, and to me, these poems sound always somewhat forced. (Not yours!)
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Marjon,
I agree with you on
rhyming poems sounding forced.
Free verse is more liberating
for me.
Richie
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And for me too.
Comment from BethShelby
I love the foggy, misty mornings too. It's enchanting. It is like a lace curtain has been draped over the world and you're in a secluded spot where magic happens. I love your poem.
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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I love the foggy, misty mornings too. It's enchanting. It is like a lace curtain has been draped over the world and you're in a secluded spot where magic happens. I love your poem.
Comment Written 29-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Thanks for the praise and review, Beth.
