Eddy's Weighty Responsibility
Tales of a wedding8 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Bednar
This does pull at the heartstrings - and obviously it is also true. Adorable. This 5-7-5 meets the requirements for a 5-7-5. I can find no fault with this poem.
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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This does pull at the heartstrings - and obviously it is also true. Adorable. This 5-7-5 meets the requirements for a 5-7-5. I can find no fault with this poem.
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Thank you, Margaret. I am glad that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
At least he held on to the important things... :) :) This is a great offering for the 5-7-5 contest! ;) Thank you for sharing your originality and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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At least he held on to the important things... :) :) This is a great offering for the 5-7-5 contest! ;) Thank you for sharing your originality and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Thank you, Yvette.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hah, Debbie!
Priceless!
I remember our son, Morgan, taking power naps in our foyer! He could sleep anywhere! He still can!
Thank you for the smile!
On to a beautiful week!
diane
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Hah, Debbie!
Priceless!
I remember our son, Morgan, taking power naps in our foyer! He could sleep anywhere! He still can!
Thank you for the smile!
On to a beautiful week!
diane
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Now that the contest is over, I can tell you that the little boy is my oldest grandson. He was literally in line with the bridal party when he decided to lay on his ring pillow. Five minute nap and he was good to go. It's my favorite memory of my baby girl's wedding.
Thank you for your sweet review.
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Oh my goodness, Debbie!
Thank you for sharing!
I love memories like this!
diane
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is so very cute. I love that he's under his mom's dress taking his nap. That's a safe place to be when your a little kid. He looks adorable. The poem is very sweet and funny too. I enjoyed it so much. -January L.
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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This is so very cute. I love that he's under his mom's dress taking his nap. That's a safe place to be when your a little kid. He looks adorable. The poem is very sweet and funny too. I enjoyed it so much. -January L.
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thank you, January. I was hoping that this poem would bring some smiles.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This was great. I really like the images that came into my mind of a little kid, the ring bearer, getting sleepy, lol. You did a nice job with your 5-7-5.
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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This was great. I really like the images that came into my mind of a little kid, the ring bearer, getting sleepy, lol. You did a nice job with your 5-7-5.
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thank you, Amanda. I just wanted to bring smiles with this one. I'm so glad that you liked it.
Comment from Puzzle
Hahahahaha omg I LOVE THIS. So funny!!! This is really creative. These short ones are harder to write than the long ones. You have to make a huge statement with 3 lines!!!! Great job!!
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Hahahahaha omg I LOVE THIS. So funny!!! This is really creative. These short ones are harder to write than the long ones. You have to make a huge statement with 3 lines!!!! Great job!!
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Oh, thank you, Puzzle. I'm glad that this one brought a smile. That was my intent.
Comment from Jacob David Collins
Carrying the ring would be a very big responsibility for such a young person. I enjoyed reading this and I thought it had a nice flow and I liked the humour as well. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Carrying the ring would be a very big responsibility for such a young person. I enjoyed reading this and I thought it had a nice flow and I liked the humour as well. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thank you. I was hoping it would bring smiles.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
What an endearing little poem! And the photo is priceless too. 5 minutes' sleep and the ring was safely brought to its destination! Lovely little story-poem and all that done in a 5-7-5. Very well done!
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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What an endearing little poem! And the photo is priceless too. 5 minutes' sleep and the ring was safely brought to its destination! Lovely little story-poem and all that done in a 5-7-5. Very well done!
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thank you. Just remembering that nap brightens my day. I wanted to share.
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Welcome. You did well. I loved it.