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Of Sea, Earth and Sky

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A collection of poems written in 5-7-5 format.

3 total reviews 
Comment from DeboraDyess
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Oh, man. We've had a few too many of those lately, haven't we.
The poem is perfect. It reminds me of a Bible verse, so that's always good, although the verses are NOT always an encouragement. They are real -- good and not fun.
The poem is a wonderful entry into the contest. Best of luck!
Blessings, peace and health,
Deb

 Comment Written 01-May-2020

reply by the author on 01-May-2020
    Thank you so much for the review. Appreciate your comments.
Comment from Susan X Smith
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This is an interesting and unique take on the writing prompt and I enjoyed reading it It is an excellent contest entry. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much for your review. Really appreciate your comments.
Comment from rspoet
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Hello Writer,
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with interesting imagery of the earth.
While haiku doesn't usually have personification references,
like giving birth, it works well here.
Excellent art work to match.
Nicely done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the review and your comments.