"Heart Spoken Moments"
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Blinded By Your Touch"Fine poetry and stories from the Heart
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Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
I love this "straight from the heart" kind of poetry. Not too much polished, showing genuine feelings, honest. Speaking of the loss of two loved ones, it also is a testimony of the non-abating trust in God.
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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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I love this "straight from the heart" kind of poetry. Not too much polished, showing genuine feelings, honest. Speaking of the loss of two loved ones, it also is a testimony of the non-abating trust in God.
Find a better contrast in the colors of the background. The text becomes too difficult to read. (advice)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Thanks forever for your wonderful review and thoughts Marion.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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It is my pleasure
Comment from January L'Angelle
Ricky, This is another excellent poem. It has so much passion and feeling behind the words. I can feel your sorrow and yearning. You should try writing lyrics for songs. You'd be good at it! Respectfully , January L.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Ricky, This is another excellent poem. It has so much passion and feeling behind the words. I can feel your sorrow and yearning. You should try writing lyrics for songs. You'd be good at it! Respectfully , January L.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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I written two songs for a Canadian being I meant in Hard Rock Hotel and Casino in Atlantic City named "Steal the Sky"
Thanks,
Ricky