"Heart Spoken Moments"
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Kissed the Moon"Fine poetry and stories from the Heart
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, you have some very powerful and some very sensual imagery written into this one, Ricky -- the "Sun's Fiery-Golden Calvacade of Hope's and Dreams" and "Fireworks Cascading".... it is truly a unique and beautiful image of the story of Creation... :) Thanx for sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Oh, you have some very powerful and some very sensual imagery written into this one, Ricky -- the "Sun's Fiery-Golden Calvacade of Hope's and Dreams" and "Fireworks Cascading".... it is truly a unique and beautiful image of the story of Creation... :) Thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thanks Yvette.
I even surprise myself sometimes.
Ricky
Comment from Puzzle
This is so beautifully written it makes me want to go find the piece that it was a continuation from. I also like the layout that you have chosen. It is perfect for the piece.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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This is so beautifully written it makes me want to go find the piece that it was a continuation from. I also like the layout that you have chosen. It is perfect for the piece.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this one.
I'll rewrite the First when Jesus in the beginning lands on the Moon from Halley's comet.
Thanks,.
Ricky