THE CURSE
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "His Beating Heart"The six book of the Novels of the Breedline
7 total reviews
Comment from ngage
Exciting chapter, Ms Shana! I wasn't expecting the Kevin scene, but it was very thrilling and entertaining. The artwork was fantastic with this. Looking forward for more. I really love the horror you have added to this. It's right down my alley.
Nate
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Exciting chapter, Ms Shana! I wasn't expecting the Kevin scene, but it was very thrilling and entertaining. The artwork was fantastic with this. Looking forward for more. I really love the horror you have added to this. It's right down my alley.
Nate
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Thanks, Nate :)
So glad you liked the horror in this one. I promise there will be more tom come. The Shadow has a big appetite. LOL! Thanks so much for all your support!
Hugs,
Shana :)
Comment from fm wright
What a chapter! Your great choice of pictures is like a mini portrayal of your story which has become so very intense. Wait with bated breath for your next posting. If it's half as good as this one it'll be amazing. Till then keep writing.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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What a chapter! Your great choice of pictures is like a mini portrayal of your story which has become so very intense. Wait with bated breath for your next posting. If it's half as good as this one it'll be amazing. Till then keep writing.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Faye :)
So happy you liked this chapter. It took a while to find the photos for the chapter, but I'm glad you approve. Stay tuned my friend, the Shadow has a big appetite. LOL!
I appreciate your support!
Hugs,
Shana :)
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I'm certain that The Shadow does have a big appetite. Don't fear, I will stay tuned because I want to find out how he is stopped.
Comment from cdefan
This is a wonderful story that pulls you into a world of drama and excitement. I look forward to the next chapter to see where the mystery leads us. Where will this demon strike next??
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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This is a wonderful story that pulls you into a world of drama and excitement. I look forward to the next chapter to see where the mystery leads us. Where will this demon strike next??
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Thank you, cdefan :)
So glad you enjoyed this one. It has a bit of horror into the chapter and it seems everyone likes this, so there will be more to come.
Hugs,
Shana :)
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a very interesting, descriptive, well-written piece from start to finish. You had me on the edge of my seat until the end. When the girls said they were going outside I thought no, don't. I was so sure Joseph was going to get them too. I'm so glad he didn't, well not yet they're still in danger. I just hope he's long gone. I have to wait a week to find out, grr. Great job as always.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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This is a very interesting, descriptive, well-written piece from start to finish. You had me on the edge of my seat until the end. When the girls said they were going outside I thought no, don't. I was so sure Joseph was going to get them too. I'm so glad he didn't, well not yet they're still in danger. I just hope he's long gone. I have to wait a week to find out, grr. Great job as always.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Mistydawn :)
I'm so glad you like the chapter. It had a bit of a gruesome part, but the Shadow's hunger never ends. You will like how this story turns out. Things get dicey as they come.
I appreciate your support!
Hugs,
Shana :)
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In other words don't snack while I'm reading, gotcha lol.
Comment from royowen
This is a mite different from all the other stories you've written dear Shana, something a little like Jack the Ripper, but definitely similar "bad guys" who will "get theirs" in due time, heh heh. I like your classy adaptability My friend, the monster here will probably meet Jena's monster eventually, beautifully written my talented friend, your stories have that great descriptively perfect touch, when you can see the scene exponentially, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Noticing the gian (whole) in Kevin's chest. Hole?
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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This is a mite different from all the other stories you've written dear Shana, something a little like Jack the Ripper, but definitely similar "bad guys" who will "get theirs" in due time, heh heh. I like your classy adaptability My friend, the monster here will probably meet Jena's monster eventually, beautifully written my talented friend, your stories have that great descriptively perfect touch, when you can see the scene exponentially, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Noticing the gian (whole) in Kevin's chest. Hole?
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Roy :)
Yes, this story is a bit different than the others. I do enjoy writing Joseph's scenes with the Shadow talking in his head. It's kind of like an evil subconscious you cannot get rid of. I'm glad you and everyone else liked this one.
Thanks for catching my typo. No one else caught it. You're a gem!
Always you fan,
Shana :)
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Well done sweet girl,
Comment from Shirley McLain
Great chapter to read. You certainly held my attention with all the blood and stuff happening. I didn't find any errors. You did a wonderful job. Shirley
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Great chapter to read. You certainly held my attention with all the blood and stuff happening. I didn't find any errors. You did a wonderful job. Shirley
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Shirley :)
I was hoping this chapter would grab the readers attention. It's fun to create supernatural creatures. Stay tuned... more of the Shadow to come. He has a big appetite. LOL!
I appreciate your support! Stay safe my friend.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Rightly, you have prompted the psychological implication and effect, the world is such because of peoples' changed behavioural and psychological treatment, action, activities that are uncontrollable, this carries changes and flow and movement of the plot through realistic characterization; I enjoyed the read; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Rightly, you have prompted the psychological implication and effect, the world is such because of peoples' changed behavioural and psychological treatment, action, activities that are uncontrollable, this carries changes and flow and movement of the plot through realistic characterization; I enjoyed the read; well said, well done.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Alcreator Litt Dear :)
I appreciate your awesome review. I am having a good time creating new supernatural creatures. The Shadow so far is my favorite. Thanks for all your support! Stay safe.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
