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Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Bella's Lost Slipper!"Children Stories from the Heart.
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Comment from Fonda Little
Mistakes I found, "'But...
'We were so, do, poor!:", you used a d instead of a s on the second so
"So they sat by the stream iat the end of the Glen...", you misspelled at, take out the i at the beginning
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Mistakes I found, "'But...
'We were so, do, poor!:", you used a d instead of a s on the second so
"So they sat by the stream iat the end of the Glen...", you misspelled at, take out the i at the beginning
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Why thank you my dear I just started the second chapter now called,
"Bella's Lost Slipper!"
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Shirley McLain
Hello, if you don't want this reviewed you should make it private again or in case you want reviews remove the "To be completed in two hours! Please do not review. 24. " Shirley
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello, if you don't want this reviewed you should make it private again or in case you want reviews remove the "To be completed in two hours! Please do not review. 24. " Shirley
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Kind of got a little busy with the things going on.
And, my friend Rob wanted me to do streaming video Church.
(At his house)
But the first chapter's completed if you would like to review?
Doctor Ricky 1024