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Poetic Treasures & Dreams

Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Dearest Hope"
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Comment from samandlancelot
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I hadn't thought of it that way, but hope is a virtue. I like that you represent hope, not as something that always has us on top, but when we can't climb any further, hope helps us to cope.

I like it.

Patricia

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Dear Patricia, Thank you for your comments, compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Michele Harber
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This is a well-done entry for the 5-7-5 Hope contest. In only 17 syllables, you manage to convey despair, hope and resilience. I wish you luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Dear Michele, thank you for your compliments and review and good luck wishes. Dove
reply by Michele Harber on 28-Mar-2020
    You?re welcome on all counts.
Comment from Susan X Smith
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This is an excellent contest entry. Your words are well chosen and I love the background color, which is certainly in keeping with the sentiment. How about adding a piece of Fan Art?

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Dear Susan, Thank you for your review, compliment. Dove