Comment from samandlancelot

Excellent

This is really nice, and the picture you chose is beautiful. To me, the rainbow promises God's presence, and that gives me peace, even if good times aren't in the future.

Patricia

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020

With God's help good times will again roll. Thanks for the read and feedback.

Comment from Mackenzie Schmidt

Good

Your Poem Rainbow seems to fit the 5-7-5 syllable structure. The picture you used worked great with the poem. The only issue is that its a tad cliché and isn't very distinguishing from the other contest submissions. Overall your poem was sweet and simple.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020

Thanks for feedback.

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.

We need that rainbow soon.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020

Thanks for the read and feedback.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this optimistic 5-7-5 I really need hope and something positive in my life. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020

The rainbows will come, have faith and hope. Thanks for the read and comment.