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5 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Mia Twysted, a marvelous Monday to you. I hope this finds you well, in good health and spirit. Thank you for sharing that story, it was a good humorous read. My only question is, if this isn't his first time doing this, why isn't he in jail or getting some help and why isn't his wife filing for a divorce? lol Good job and have a good day!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Hello Mia Twysted, a marvelous Monday to you. I hope this finds you well, in good health and spirit. Thank you for sharing that story, it was a good humorous read. My only question is, if this isn't his first time doing this, why isn't he in jail or getting some help and why isn't his wife filing for a divorce? lol Good job and have a good day!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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All good questions to have? It makes me want to do a follow up on him.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
No body exchange fluids now, pretty please, not with virus knocking everything over. Jokes aside I really appreciate the subtle humor of this piece. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next writing.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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No body exchange fluids now, pretty please, not with virus knocking everything over. Jokes aside I really appreciate the subtle humor of this piece. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next writing.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This image of a man sharing tea with a thousand pound bear is very funny once you get over the horror of it. This is a creative write. I love your lighthearted writing style. Brings me back to some of my favorite authors. Very creative and unique.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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This image of a man sharing tea with a thousand pound bear is very funny once you get over the horror of it. This is a creative write. I love your lighthearted writing style. Brings me back to some of my favorite authors. Very creative and unique.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the review. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from Mistydawn
He's very persistent, I'll give him that. It's too bad he can't exchange a little of his determination for the few bricks he seems to be lacking, lol. Maybe he should stick with domestic animals. Fewer broken bones that away. Your story is very well-written, interesting. I love the colorful names. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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He's very persistent, I'll give him that. It's too bad he can't exchange a little of his determination for the few bricks he seems to be lacking, lol. Maybe he should stick with domestic animals. Fewer broken bones that away. Your story is very well-written, interesting. I love the colorful names. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Thank you I am glad you liked it.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Hilarious!! I think what makes it all the more entertaining is the fact that it's written from a 'serious' perspective - lol! ;) Thanx for sharing! :)
Sunday best Odour --> Sunday best, Odour
gentle took the fine --> gently took the fine
neighbor professional --> neighbor, professional
with zebra and --> with a zebra and
in the cloud," --> in the clouds,"
and at times almost deadly, mission --> and, at times, almost deadly mission
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hilarious!! I think what makes it all the more entertaining is the fact that it's written from a 'serious' perspective - lol! ;) Thanx for sharing! :)
Sunday best Odour --> Sunday best, Odour
gentle took the fine --> gently took the fine
neighbor professional --> neighbor, professional
with zebra and --> with a zebra and
in the cloud," --> in the clouds,"
and at times almost deadly, mission --> and, at times, almost deadly mission
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Sorry it took so long to get back to you, things have been crazy.
Thank you so much for your help and I have gone through and made the corrections.
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Sorry it took so long to get back to you, things have been crazy.
Thank you so much for your help and I have gone through and made the corrections.