Joker
5-7-5 poem ..please read notes.3 total reviews
Comment from rhonnie69
CIAO POET: I enjoyed viewing your bird poem, entitled "JOKER," here, in that it reminds me of a similar poem that I wrote entitled, "A SPARROW IN THE SNOW."
Writing this wee witty ditty, entitled, "JOKER," was fun...wasn't it? It shows not only how clever the bird is...but also it shows just how talented and skillful the poet is, in the manner in which the piece of art is exhibited and expressed... in only three lines and sixteen words. Well done, poet. This poem is good. You are good too. Write another...encore. This was a, "LIVE 5-7-5." God bless you. CIAO, poet Cordially: rhonnie69.
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CIAO POET: I enjoyed viewing your bird poem, entitled "JOKER," here, in that it reminds me of a similar poem that I wrote entitled, "A SPARROW IN THE SNOW."
Writing this wee witty ditty, entitled, "JOKER," was fun...wasn't it? It shows not only how clever the bird is...but also it shows just how talented and skillful the poet is, in the manner in which the piece of art is exhibited and expressed... in only three lines and sixteen words. Well done, poet. This poem is good. You are good too. Write another...encore. This was a, "LIVE 5-7-5." God bless you. CIAO, poet Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Bird teases your cat, but it is in many ways goes on, joking pinches your heart, you sometime fears of a fatal outcome, human nature is promoted clearly; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this, sponsoring membership.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Bird teases your cat, but it is in many ways goes on, joking pinches your heart, you sometime fears of a fatal outcome, human nature is promoted clearly; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this, sponsoring membership.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Ciao Alcreator, nice to see you ..thanks for reviewing my wee poem on Merl and my cat Pete...animals, pets are so much like us in their mannerisms.
Wish you a peaceful Sunday!
Comment from samandlancelot
So cute. Bigger isn't always better. I like your monorhyme. I like that you named the bird Merl. Your title is perfect and adds to the personality you've captured in your poem. Nice!
Patricia
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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So cute. Bigger isn't always better. I like your monorhyme. I like that you named the bird Merl. Your title is perfect and adds to the personality you've captured in your poem. Nice!
Patricia
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Ciao Patricia, glad you enjoyed the read ..
...this Merl/ blackbird was very cheeky..Pete never gave up and ever so often he would have a go in catching the little devil...
...when he missed he would stroll off with an attitude of " I really wasnt' trying to catch him ". ( biggrin )
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I grinned big, too.