Migration
Yearly Event7 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Bye Bye Blackbird writing prompt.
This short verse tells a good story and is the perfect match for the amazing artwork.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Bye Bye Blackbird writing prompt.
This short verse tells a good story and is the perfect match for the amazing artwork.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and the imagery is effective.
-The wording in your poem
is very creative in the first two lines.
-A very good satori line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and the imagery is effective.
-The wording in your poem
is very creative in the first two lines.
-A very good satori line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from zanya
Yes birds have a lot of sense it seems - they know how to get out as the winter winds threaten to blow and reside in warmer climes - nice pic to illustrate
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Yes birds have a lot of sense it seems - they know how to get out as the winter winds threaten to blow and reside in warmer climes - nice pic to illustrate
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Dancemom
This is a well-written poem for the bird 575 contest. You have told a nice story about how birds migrate south for the winter.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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This is a well-written poem for the bird 575 contest. You have told a nice story about how birds migrate south for the winter.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from rspoet
You've written and excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
but the color is difficult to read.
The image of the birds flying south is very good.
I'd like to join them.
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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You've written and excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
but the color is difficult to read.
The image of the birds flying south is very good.
I'd like to join them.
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Good job with the syllable count. The presentation is nice. I think skyful is not a word. Did you mean, sky full? Just checking. Good luck with the black black bird contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Hello, my friend,
Good job with the syllable count. The presentation is nice. I think skyful is not a word. Did you mean, sky full? Just checking. Good luck with the black black bird contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Thanks for your review. According to Merriam Webster dictionary skyful is a word : "as much or as many as the sky can accommodate"
Comment from Gypsymooncat
I always find winter a bit solemn as it's not brimming over with birdsong and chirps.
I loved the presentation of this, and the wording as well. Good luck in the voting!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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I always find winter a bit solemn as it's not brimming over with birdsong and chirps.
I loved the presentation of this, and the wording as well. Good luck in the voting!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.