Gazania
5-7-5 flower2 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
A pretty 5/7/5 poem contest entry. I like the presentation, the picture is very nice and the color scheme is good. The syllable count is right. The poem doesn't flow well, it's three separate lines.
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Hello, my friend,
A pretty 5/7/5 poem contest entry. I like the presentation, the picture is very nice and the color scheme is good. The syllable count is right. The poem doesn't flow well, it's three separate lines.
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
That's an absolutely beautiful flower. It does kind of resemble a sunset also. I like what you've done with this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Great job and well done!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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That's an absolutely beautiful flower. It does kind of resemble a sunset also. I like what you've done with this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Great job and well done!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your review!