Syllable Counts ...
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Mary's Dowry"Anything to do with syllables
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- now that certainly says a whole lot...almost the form of an indictment. Great form and message for only 15 syllables... as they used to say back in the day: 'heavy'... :) :) Well written and best of luck in the contest! Yvette
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Wow -- now that certainly says a whole lot...almost the form of an indictment. Great form and message for only 15 syllables... as they used to say back in the day: 'heavy'... :) :) Well written and best of luck in the contest! Yvette
Comment Written 02-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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not too heavy it sinks I hope lol.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Bicpen,
You've written an interesting poem for the fifteen syllable contest
which has a feeling of antiquity in the old powers of Europe.
This could also be a strong fantasy poem which also emulates
olden times.
It is written like a contemporary haiku.
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Hello Bicpen,
You've written an interesting poem for the fifteen syllable contest
which has a feeling of antiquity in the old powers of Europe.
This could also be a strong fantasy poem which also emulates
olden times.
It is written like a contemporary haiku.
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Excellent ... I thought about feet and metre unfortunately I dont know much about the haiku though it is an interest would like to discover contemporary or otherwise.
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
It's a wonderful poetry and carries a strong message. You said it beautifully with well chosen words. I hope you'll be able to secure a good place in this contest. Wish you luck!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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It's a wonderful poetry and carries a strong message. You said it beautifully with well chosen words. I hope you'll be able to secure a good place in this contest. Wish you luck!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Thank you my friend as far as comps go I aint got much of a winning streak but if its getting me writing again here's to it ...
Comment from Ricky1024
"Mary's Dowry"
Is a 15 Syllable Poem Contest Entry.
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Was very well-written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis;
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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"Mary's Dowry"
Is a 15 Syllable Poem Contest Entry.
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Was very well-written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis;
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Many thanks my friend ... I wondered about what I could do with just fifteen syllables and there you have it. I am glad you can give me a synopsis as it helps with my own judgement on the piece ... much obliged.
Comment from Carl DeVere
I followed your poem very well and it was well illustrated. I was not so sure that I was following your author's notes, however. Nonetheless, I still enjoyed all of it. Perhaps you are suggesting something that I might not have considered. I like that. Good author photo also...and pen name.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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I followed your poem very well and it was well illustrated. I was not so sure that I was following your author's notes, however. Nonetheless, I still enjoyed all of it. Perhaps you are suggesting something that I might not have considered. I like that. Good author photo also...and pen name.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Well the great principality that is Rome likes to devour and unfortunately we as Great Britain have been suckling on her for to long ... it is a small piece to declare our own resistance and liberty from such a dragon.
Comment from Mia Twysted
Mary's Dowry strikes me as somewhat regal, prime, and proper. It suggests a higher standard and structured dynamic. It almost feels royal if you will.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Mary's Dowry strikes me as somewhat regal, prime, and proper. It suggests a higher standard and structured dynamic. It almost feels royal if you will.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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well it may be if you have the eyes and perspective to see it as when you have fifteen syllables you gotta think about it ... but knowing me and competitions I'll get no where ...
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your spiritual, 15-Syllable Poem and your notes about the form. I especially liked your intensifying the message with the alliteration of "s's" and the "hanging line. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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I admired your spiritual, 15-Syllable Poem and your notes about the form. I especially liked your intensifying the message with the alliteration of "s's" and the "hanging line. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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many thanks much appreciated ... people like you make it worth while.
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Thank you for your warmhearted response. Smiles- Joan
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anytime ...