Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

Great job with this short poem that uses personification to bring the sparks from the fire to life and dance around in the darkened sky. Thanks for sharing for the contest.
Bill

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020

Thanks much for the read and positive feedback.

Comment from Supe

Excellent

Nice presentation. Love the red on black. Works well. Perfect word count. Great creative approach to fire dancing over the lake. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020

Thanks much for the read and positive feedback.

reply by Supe on 31-Jan-2020

reply by Supe on 31-Jan-2020

you are welcome.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Oh, the fun times when the weather's cool and fire light and warmth are a great way to end a day with friends! ;) Thanx for sharing that visual and best of luck in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020

Thanks much for the read and positive feedback.