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Pastasciutta

3,5,7 poem

3 total reviews 
Comment from rhonnie69
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

CIAO TEMPESTE: I "WILL," work for food. I'll walk Toby on turbulent weather days...and stormy nights too...while you stay home and eat sweets that I bring to you. Ciao, Tempeste...Your handyman. Cordially: rhonnie69. P.S. I will, request, "seconds." There's only one thing that I like more than I like food...and that's her hands that prepare it."

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2020

Comment from May 1
Excellent
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Wow, this sure sounds delicious. The poem makes me salivate and the image increases the feeling even more so I think this is an awesome poem with just the right image.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Just looking at the pic made my mouth water...

    out of curiosity, I tried once those American burgers but in all honesty, I prefer la pasta ...

    All the best for the weekend , May!



Comment from Ricky1024
Excellent
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"Pastasciutti"
Is a 3-7-5 poem writing prompt entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Ciao Ricky , nice to hear from you!

    I hope my colourful pic got your taste buds working...

    Hands down....Italian cuisine is the best ( biggrin )

    Okay, I sound biased but don't tell me you don't love ..... le lasagne ....for example.. ( wink )

    I love pizza too ..my favourite is Margherita.....I prefer simple over all those elaborate choices ..

    I wish you a peaceful weekend,

    Ciao .... Franca.
reply by Ricky1024 on 01-Feb-2020
    I want that Italian girlfriend many years ago named Nancy Esposito with 48 double D's.
    Damn I miss them tits!
    Ricky