Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

What a wonderfully written poem. I also love to watch wind create waves across a lake when the fish aren't biting.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020

Thanks.

Comment from phill doran

Excellent

Hello Anon
Very good. A compact image, well described and making use of 'dancing' and 'performance' to create an added dimension to the experience.
I do think that "...breathtaking..." is a single word, but this is a small point in passing.
I wish you well with your writing.
cheers
phill

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020

Thanks.