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Rags

This fella was a lover

3 total reviews 
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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And the moral is whatš???good intention missing apparatus? Otherwise, i think the poem meets the contest criteria. This is quite a funny poem.thank you for sharing, and good luck with your next verse.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
    Thanks for the read. I'm not sure what your opening question means. I am not aware that limericks need a moral. My understanding is that they are meant to create funny and humorous images. Am I missing something?
reply by Iza Deleanu on 28-Jan-2020
    No you don't need a moral, that was my idea of reviewing the poem.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
    OK, thanks for reply.
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Harry,

Rags may be a cad, but you are a limerick poet. Your rhyme scheme is good.

Not being a dog owner, methinks mutt and cad go together, but the dog looks to me that it is not a mutt. If you took the photo, then you know (-;

Best wishes in this contest.

Mark

Mark

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
    Thanks for the read and review. According to the mutt website, he is a mutt.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the "The Art of the Limerick" contest.
This short verse tells of Rags the cad chasing the ladies.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
    Thanks much for the encouraging words.