Finches
Our year-round feeder friends33 total reviews
Comment from May 1
Aww, that's so beautifully said, it sounds like magic. Also, I love the happy tone that I feel radiating from this poem. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Aww, that's so beautifully said, it sounds like magic. Also, I love the happy tone that I feel radiating from this poem. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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This was one of those 'odd' forms that pops up in the writing prompts some times.... I'm always good for a challenge!! ;) :) Thanx so much for stopping in, May!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bobby Jo
This is cute, as if the words almost sing a song. They sing a song of beauty. These poems are fun, I like coming up with all sorts of words that start with the same letter, It will be nice to hit spring and listen to the birds again.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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This is cute, as if the words almost sing a song. They sing a song of beauty. These poems are fun, I like coming up with all sorts of words that start with the same letter, It will be nice to hit spring and listen to the birds again.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for your review on this one, Bobby Jo -- and thanx for stopping by... Hope you're having a wonderful start to your New Year and that it is filled with happy surprises as the months pass us by! ;) Yvette
Comment from Ogden
Congratulations on your finch's second place finish, Yvette!
It looks like you might deserve additional credit as the finch photographer.
:o)
Hugs,
Don
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Congratulations on your finch's second place finish, Yvette!
It looks like you might deserve additional credit as the finch photographer.
:o)
Hugs,
Don
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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LOL!! They are just so much fun, Don!! ;) Thanx for the congrats and the review -- and I do hope that you have a wonderful start to this New Decade, my friend!! ;) Take care and I'll see ya round that pen of yours!! ;) :) LOL! ;) Yvette
Comment from Terry wrote
What a lovely, cheerful poem you have shared with us! You make it seem so easy to write in rhyme and alliteration ... your stanzas flow evenly and prettily. Thank you so much for sharing this! You have a definite style.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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What a lovely, cheerful poem you have shared with us! You make it seem so easy to write in rhyme and alliteration ... your stanzas flow evenly and prettily. Thank you so much for sharing this! You have a definite style.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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Hooray! So glad you enjoyed my finches, Terry -- they are always such fun and entertaining lil fellas that they are my inspiration for 'upbeat' and 'happy'!! ;) Thanx so much for such a wonderful review and those shiny stars, my lady, and may you have a New Year fo unexpected blessings up there! :) Yvette
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author, This is a sweet little poem about Finches, lively little things that light up our days. I'm not sure that the Pleiades form wants you to use the same first-word several times. I don't think there's any rule about not doing it, I just think that it's more of an exercise in creativity to use different words that begin with that letter.
It is a really sweet poem though, just the way it is. :)
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Hello Author, This is a sweet little poem about Finches, lively little things that light up our days. I'm not sure that the Pleiades form wants you to use the same first-word several times. I don't think there's any rule about not doing it, I just think that it's more of an exercise in creativity to use different words that begin with that letter.
It is a really sweet poem though, just the way it is. :)
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Thanx for the review on the Finches, Beautiful Lady up North!! Didn't see anything where repetition was an issue and the committee let it go through so, I'm guessing twas okay - lol! :) Take care, my friend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bichon
I loved the whole layout and rhythm of this poem. I don't believe I've ever seen a finch where I'm from, but your poem pleasantly got me acquainted with them!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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I loved the whole layout and rhythm of this poem. I don't believe I've ever seen a finch where I'm from, but your poem pleasantly got me acquainted with them!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed the finches - such fun little fellas! Thanks for your review!!
Comment from Gail Denham
Yes, we get some of the finches here - it's at least a change from our constant nuthatches and chickadees - all of which we also enjoy. A few times we get crossed beaks - boy are they cranky.
Well done for this poem form.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Yes, we get some of the finches here - it's at least a change from our constant nuthatches and chickadees - all of which we also enjoy. A few times we get crossed beaks - boy are they cranky.
Well done for this poem form.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed the finches! Thanks for your wonderful review!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I really like this poem. It brought up vivid memories of these beautiful birds that bring color and joy into our lives. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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I really like this poem. It brought up vivid memories of these beautiful birds that bring color and joy into our lives. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Hooray! I am so glad you enjoyed the finches - they're such fun little fellas, aren't they? Thanks so much for your comments and those lovely stars! Happy New Year!
Comment from Dancemom
This is a sweet poem describing these wonderful creatures. I love when I see finches outside in the woods behind my house. We get the yellow ones and grey and black ones in the winter. Watching finches and cardinals on a dreary winter day always puts a smile on my face. Great poem with great rhymes!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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This is a sweet poem describing these wonderful creatures. I love when I see finches outside in the woods behind my house. We get the yellow ones and grey and black ones in the winter. Watching finches and cardinals on a dreary winter day always puts a smile on my face. Great poem with great rhymes!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed the finches - they are such wonderful lil fellas!! Thanks for your review!
Comment from June Sargent
They do bring cheer with them with their antics and chants! Spring would not be the same without their joyful presence. Feathery friends add so much to our lives. Thanks for highlighting them.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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They do bring cheer with them with their antics and chants! Spring would not be the same without their joyful presence. Feathery friends add so much to our lives. Thanks for highlighting them.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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You've just got to love the little fellas! Thanks for your review!