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Comment from brenda faye curtis
This nonet--or mononet--is brilliantly penned, and even tapers properly, as a nonet is supposed to. I couldn't make mine turn out that well. I wish you best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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This nonet--or mononet--is brilliantly penned, and even tapers properly, as a nonet is supposed to. I couldn't make mine turn out that well. I wish you best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Brenda
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You're welcome, Bill.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a technically sound Nonet Poem with correct line and syllable count throughout. The content is beautifully executed as your use of powerful imagery is tempered by the simplicity of the message itself. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a technically sound Nonet Poem with correct line and syllable count throughout. The content is beautifully executed as your use of powerful imagery is tempered by the simplicity of the message itself. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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Thank you, MA
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Bill. I like this one. The name dubbed by Phyllis is a good definition of what's normally called a monorhyme. Unirhyme fits, too. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Hi Bill. I like this one. The name dubbed by Phyllis is a good definition of what's normally called a monorhyme. Unirhyme fits, too. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Marilyn
Comment from Joan E.
I am amazed you were able to employ mono-verse rhyme in your Nonet. I was also pleased you were able to showcase a lady's "power"! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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I am amazed you were able to employ mono-verse rhyme in your Nonet. I was also pleased you were able to showcase a lady's "power"! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Joan, for the terrific review. Bill
Comment from Mrs. KT
Why, yes, Bill!
I am... I mean, 'We are!' :)
I do surmise,
Very creative and wise
to write about a woman's eyes!
Loved it!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Why, yes, Bill!
I am... I mean, 'We are!' :)
I do surmise,
Very creative and wise
to write about a woman's eyes!
Loved it!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Diane.
Comment from Earl Corp
This was probably the best nonet poetry I have ever read on this site. It rhymes, makes sense, and it tells a truth all men should know. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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This was probably the best nonet poetry I have ever read on this site. It rhymes, makes sense, and it tells a truth all men should know. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Earl
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a well-written poem, interesting, has a nice rhyme with a fun flow. Your word choice sounds like it comes from experience. especially the part about the soul-piercing eyes. I thought he's been the dog house a time or two. Nice job.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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This is a well-written poem, interesting, has a nice rhyme with a fun flow. Your word choice sounds like it comes from experience. especially the part about the soul-piercing eyes. I thought he's been the dog house a time or two. Nice job.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thank you, MD
Comment from Brett Matthew West
If one suggestion may be offered, perhaps reconsider and take the spacing out between the lines. So true, a smart man knows how ingenious women are. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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If one suggestion may be offered, perhaps reconsider and take the spacing out between the lines. So true, a smart man knows how ingenious women are. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Noted and under consideration.
Comment from nomi338
Absolutely. Shame on any man who thinks that he is pulling the wool over those piercing eyes that look into the very soul of a man, extracting the truth behind his feeble attempt to deceive her.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Absolutely. Shame on any man who thinks that he is pulling the wool over those piercing eyes that look into the very soul of a man, extracting the truth behind his feeble attempt to deceive her.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Exactly.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
She's wise, guys. And you're a wise guy for seeing it. Very nicely done. The mono-rhyme is a great addition, and it fits in perfectly. This should be a special type of nonet--the mononet. :)
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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She's wise, guys. And you're a wise guy for seeing it. Very nicely done. The mono-rhyme is a great addition, and it fits in perfectly. This should be a special type of nonet--the mononet. :)
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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It shall be mononet. I changed the description.
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:)