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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
It is quite the mystery the prince will have on his hands. Red feathers appear to be the clue he will need to follow. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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It is quite the mystery the prince will have on his hands. Red feathers appear to be the clue he will need to follow. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Yes once he goes into the Lost Woods in gets the Seven dwarfs involve the storyline will unravel.
Thanks,
Ricky
Note:
This is written right at the beginning of my relationship hearing fanstory probably about 7 years ago.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Two incidents took place, Rose Red and Snow White both were taken away and fade away in the dark, as if fate engulfed them into a mystic land; well said, well done.
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Two incidents took place, Rose Red and Snow White both were taken away and fade away in the dark, as if fate engulfed them into a mystic land; well said, well done.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Thanks alcreator.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from tim dodd
my favorite part is snow whites sister
rose red I think you should go from
their if you want to write a sequel
you know snow with lived happily ever
after but her younger sister rose red had some drama
rose red had an abusive husband or something
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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my favorite part is snow whites sister
rose red I think you should go from
their if you want to write a sequel
you know snow with lived happily ever
after but her younger sister rose red had some drama
rose red had an abusive husband or something
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Oh, didn't know that about Rose Red.
Conclusion today.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024.
Comment from beizanten
A rather interesting and original story of snow white and red rose. short and simple plotline but quite well written. You have done quite well I am torn between four star and five star but I think the plotline need improving
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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A rather interesting and original story of snow white and red rose. short and simple plotline but quite well written. You have done quite well I am torn between four star and five star but I think the plotline need improving
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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This will be completed a little later today and thanks for your time and review.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Mistydawn
You might want to recheck this post. All I see is your copywriting discloser and then your thanks. Please let me know when it's fixed because I'd love to read it.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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You might want to recheck this post. All I see is your copywriting discloser and then your thanks. Please let me know when it's fixed because I'd love to read it.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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I actually wrote that 6 years ago.
I search my portfolio got to the very beginning and then as I started going backwards I got stuck on one poem for some reason?
The most impossible to located my collection since I have over 600 books written in hundreds of thousands of porms.
I will present it shortly as a rewrite.
Ricky
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Ricky, my friend. Your story is missing from this. There is just the intro and your author note. I hope to get back to it after the rest of it is posted~Debbie
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Ricky, my friend. Your story is missing from this. There is just the intro and your author note. I hope to get back to it after the rest of it is posted~Debbie
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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They want to prevent it is a rewrite so I went back six years worth almost 50 pages worth of work here at fan story.
after getting to the beginning I got stuck on the same single 5 7-5 haiku poem as I went in reverse it wouldn't let me back into the books.
Repost it shortly hazard rewrite.
Ricky