"Beautiful!"
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
So the vials brought the Rabbit to heaven.... the Rabbit Hole was the pathway there... hmmmm. I missed that, I suppose. :) :) Another great one in your series, Doc -- thanx for sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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So the vials brought the Rabbit to heaven.... the Rabbit Hole was the pathway there... hmmmm. I missed that, I suppose. :) :) Another great one in your series, Doc -- thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Sounds like you enjoy this more than I did writing it!
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
I'm pretty sure there is some kind of divine celebration on Easter and Christmas :). I loved all the rabbit's suggestions to make heaven a happier place for bunnies - guess he kept the Archangels all hopping. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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I'm pretty sure there is some kind of divine celebration on Easter and Christmas :). I loved all the rabbit's suggestions to make heaven a happier place for bunnies - guess he kept the Archangels all hopping. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Thanks again Angel.
Try Writting on this Subject.
Feedback is needed here in...
"The Heavenly Department!"
Ricky
Comment from Susan Larson
This is An entertaining and whimsical story that kept moving and making me want to move along with it. Cute twists and turns in the story. I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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This is An entertaining and whimsical story that kept moving and making me want to move along with it. Cute twists and turns in the story. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Thanks Susan.
Here to impress.
Ricky
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is a lovely piece that taps into a long history of fiction blurring with reality. I enjoyed reading it {thumbs up}.
Through the Alice Looking Glass -- This is a great snippet. Most people will be familiar with Alice's Adventures in Wonderland and Alice Through the Looking Glass by Lewis Carroll. By referencing them, you're tapping into already established reader knowledge that relates to this piece {thumbs up}.
I'd never heard of Sassafras trees before. I did a quick google on them. Thank you for introducing them to me and broadening my horizon {smiles}.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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This is a lovely piece that taps into a long history of fiction blurring with reality. I enjoyed reading it {thumbs up}.
Through the Alice Looking Glass -- This is a great snippet. Most people will be familiar with Alice's Adventures in Wonderland and Alice Through the Looking Glass by Lewis Carroll. By referencing them, you're tapping into already established reader knowledge that relates to this piece {thumbs up}.
I'd never heard of Sassafras trees before. I did a quick google on them. Thank you for introducing them to me and broadening my horizon {smiles}.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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I originally planned to get him get ousted from Heaven.
This way he can go back to his girlfriend.
By having him get drunk.
But that notion was changed to having him pray.
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a whimsical write Ricky and I enjoyed your dream where you were lost for a while in the softness of the story and the ambient atmospherics, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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This is a whimsical write Ricky and I enjoyed your dream where you were lost for a while in the softness of the story and the ambient atmospherics, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Sometimes, I get into the mood to write these children take things.
And, they are actually quite enjoyable to create.
Thanks,
Ricky