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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Ahhhh....such a romantic look at the artful splash of spaghetti sauce... kindof gives credence to the term we authors use: spag. ;) :) :) Thanx for the grins this morning.... yeah, and, like I used to constantly say to the boys at the table: lean over your plate when you take a bite! ;) :) Yvette

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
    I am a holey spoon victim along with my shirts.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
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Hi Bill,
I've been AWOL for a while and it is lovely to see you posting poetry.
I'm surprised how a blob of sauce produced this result.
Quite an effective use of style.
Blessings
Shirley

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
    Thanks, Shirley
reply by Shirley E Kennedy on 07-Oct-2019
    You're welcome.
Comment from nomi338
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This is the very reason the clerk at the local cleaners know me by sight. You would think by now I would have learned, but no, I keep on making the same mess every time I eat something juicy in my freshly dry cleaned suit.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
    I have to eat baby bites or I paint my face and lap with food.
reply by nomi338 on 07-Oct-2019
    I knew it, you are an animal.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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I have always loved the word "ort" - it gets far too little use so I am happy to see somebody paying it some well deserved homage :). This is well penned and uses the word splendidly. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
    Thanks, MA. It was that ort another word. : )
Comment from Bill Pinder
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This is a humorous writing about a guy that seriously needs a bib. I hope you didn't have to watch the guy eat. Thanks for sharing your creativity.
Bill

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
    Thanks, Bill
Comment from Cindy Warren
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I've never heard 'ort' used in that context before. I thought the ort cloud was a bunch of space junk out by Pluto. Interesting, it has another meaning. This one needs some Spray n'Wash.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
    This shirt needs to become a shop rag and the wearer would do as well getting fed with a sling shot. : )
Comment from juliaSjames
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I had to look up "ort". It's a fabulous fit for a disgusting scrap, especially as you describe it. But it happens to us all so I won't judge.

Did you mean "bib" in the penultimate line?

Blessings Julia


 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
    Thanks, Julia, for your help.