Nature's Poetic Voice.
Viewing comments for Chapter 58 "Autumn's Orange Hues."A sensory appreciation of nature.
6 total reviews
Comment from Mark Howitt
A beautiful depiction of autumn, in disciplines form and rhyme that doesn't weigh down the lightness of the poem's heart.
The form only falters once, v3; may I propose the following, off the top of my head?
If leaves of verdant hues drop down
A vibrant mix of green and brown
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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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A beautiful depiction of autumn, in disciplines form and rhyme that doesn't weigh down the lightness of the poem's heart.
The form only falters once, v3; may I propose the following, off the top of my head?
If leaves of verdant hues drop down
A vibrant mix of green and brown
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Thank you.
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Most welcome.
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By the way, any chance of reviewing some of mine so I can get above the magical 5 reviews?
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Yes, sorry I am off site at the moment but will be happy to take a look ASAP.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. You managed to capture the essence of the contest through a rhyming verse. Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. You managed to capture the essence of the contest through a rhyming verse. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Gypsymooncat
Fabulous poem, stunning presentation, I drank in every orangey, autumny word in this piece. I'd wager it's a winning entry, and hope it gets there, or at the least, does well. I also appreciated how you kept a smooth, natural flow to this while sticking to that eight-syllable count, which is no mean feat at all. Well done! Good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Fabulous poem, stunning presentation, I drank in every orangey, autumny word in this piece. I'd wager it's a winning entry, and hope it gets there, or at the least, does well. I also appreciated how you kept a smooth, natural flow to this while sticking to that eight-syllable count, which is no mean feat at all. Well done! Good luck!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you for a lovely six star review.
I truly appreciate it.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Extended personification marks this autumn poem with a more active sense. Favorite lines: Across the towns and rolling hills/the leaves will dance until wind stills. I got the idea that vibrant colours in the last stanza were more feminine this time around as they were said to 'primp and preen.' It sounds as if the autumn season were meant to add color 'to the moody blues' to be uplifting to our mood. Great poem, good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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Extended personification marks this autumn poem with a more active sense. Favorite lines: Across the towns and rolling hills/the leaves will dance until wind stills. I got the idea that vibrant colours in the last stanza were more feminine this time around as they were said to 'primp and preen.' It sounds as if the autumn season were meant to add color 'to the moody blues' to be uplifting to our mood. Great poem, good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Cheryl I
This is a good entry for the Orange You Glad It's Autumn contest. Autumn is my favorite time of year, and I love all the beautiful colors. Nice job on this poem.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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This is a good entry for the Orange You Glad It's Autumn contest. Autumn is my favorite time of year, and I love all the beautiful colors. Nice job on this poem.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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Thank You.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a delightful poem about autumn and orange my friend. Strong rhymes and nice imagery. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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This is a delightful poem about autumn and orange my friend. Strong rhymes and nice imagery. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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Thank you.