Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

The society 's decay can be combated only on your knees and pray. Thank you so much for sharing this fantastic poem and good luck with your writing.ð???

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019

Thank you for the review and compliments. Blessings to you also.

Comment from Cybertron1986

Excellent

A justified and validated prayer for the conditions that plague both the mind and spirit of today's participants. This piece reminded me of everything that used to be in schools, churches, and in public settings. Somewhere, the path to these lost values are still alive.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019

Thank you for the review, compliments an time rate this poem offering. Blessings.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Interestingly effective in conveying a mood or a message - yours is contemplative and almost plaintive. Well-done. :) thank you for sharing this new form! ;)

Yesterday's --> Yesterdays [throughout]

At a Societ's Decay --> At a Society's Decay [first and third stanzas]

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019

Thank you for the review and compliments. It's A Very similar form to a previous entry posting. Blessings to you for Valued Perspective.