Twin Towers of Strength
A Senryu11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great job with this poem that honors this nation and its determination to go forward and be stronger than ever. God Bless this country To honor him.
Bill
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Great job with this poem that honors this nation and its determination to go forward and be stronger than ever. God Bless this country To honor him.
Bill
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Thank you for this wonderful review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from jenintorre
I really like this Kahpot. It is a brilliant senryu You will certainly have my vote. 'Felled' what a descriptive word. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
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I really like this Kahpot. It is a brilliant senryu You will certainly have my vote. 'Felled' what a descriptive word. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Thank your wonderful comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. Give included a haunting picture with your verse. You have met the criteria of the Senryu poem. It is a timely piece and your description in verse of the picture is strong and ends as a resolution for the country.. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Hello mystery writer. Give included a haunting picture with your verse. You have met the criteria of the Senryu poem. It is a timely piece and your description in verse of the picture is strong and ends as a resolution for the country.. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Senryu about the Twin towers that were brutally demolished after terrorists fly two planes into the building killing over 3000 people and the twin towers tumbled to the ground.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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A very well-written Senryu about the Twin towers that were brutally demolished after terrorists fly two planes into the building killing over 3000 people and the twin towers tumbled to the ground.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gail Denham
The nation did come round after that horrible day - and it made me proud to see the actions and prayers and thoughts of so many caring people. Yet I'm sure there are still folks suffering and sad after losing someone. And we must not let our guard down.
Good poem
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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The nation did come round after that horrible day - and it made me proud to see the actions and prayers and thoughts of so many caring people. Yet I'm sure there are still folks suffering and sad after losing someone. And we must not let our guard down.
Good poem
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Very interesting commentary. The destruction of the towers made us stronger as a nation. Patriotism is o kay again. Thank for this poem, and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Very interesting commentary. The destruction of the towers made us stronger as a nation. Patriotism is o kay again. Thank for this poem, and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the sentiment here as the people united in this tragic and cowardly act which only served to make America stronger than ever, as we remember, this is a great tribute to the people, love Dolly x
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I enjoyed the sentiment here as the people united in this tragic and cowardly act which only served to make America stronger than ever, as we remember, this is a great tribute to the people, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Many thanks for your comments
Comment from Anntonette
I like the bit of alliteration you added there, alliteration being my favorite poetic device. Good choice on the image, very settling.
Thank you for sharing!
- Anntonette J
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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I like the bit of alliteration you added there, alliteration being my favorite poetic device. Good choice on the image, very settling.
Thank you for sharing!
- Anntonette J
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a great senryu. I like your tribute to the people who lost their lives on 9-11. I particularly like your words "their stature unweakened." The disaster did galvanize a nation. It's hard for me to believe that people can be so cruel to deliberately cause such pain.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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What a great senryu. I like your tribute to the people who lost their lives on 9-11. I particularly like your words "their stature unweakened." The disaster did galvanize a nation. It's hard for me to believe that people can be so cruel to deliberately cause such pain.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This poem contains the cry of a nation, but also the wake up call for unity and peace. Your poem is perfect and the symbol you choose represents the best what happened on 11th. of September. "Twin towers of pride - strengths Nation. " Good luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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This poem contains the cry of a nation, but also the wake up call for unity and peace. Your poem is perfect and the symbol you choose represents the best what happened on 11th. of September. "Twin towers of pride - strengths Nation. " Good luck with the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much