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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi rhonnie69
What a fun poem to read of how we and of course how we can let loose and feel free.
Written in seven lines with each line with required number of syllables.
Gert
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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Hi rhonnie69
What a fun poem to read of how we and of course how we can let loose and feel free.
Written in seven lines with each line with required number of syllables.
Gert
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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HELLO GERT: WOW! You're giving me more reviews than I can keep up with. But try I shall...and try again. Thank you, my friend. God bless you, Gert. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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You are welcome rhonnie69
well long as you write and post your writings I will keep reviewing them.
Smiles Gert
Comment from Patty Palmer
This poem is bright and happy. A nice children's poem. Light and
airy and I can almost see the kids dancing along following the big boy in the lead. LOL Reminds me of Barney the purple dinosaur. I'm tired just thinking about the energy those kids would have playing there!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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This poem is bright and happy. A nice children's poem. Light and
airy and I can almost see the kids dancing along following the big boy in the lead. LOL Reminds me of Barney the purple dinosaur. I'm tired just thinking about the energy those kids would have playing there!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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HELLO PATTY: I thank you for your encouraging helpful review .You are appreciated. I'm glad I was able to show, "Child Fun," kind of pictures in your imagery. That is what I hoped I could do for my readers. God bless you, Patty. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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You're very welcome!!
Comment from Susan X Smith
This little poem is simple, yet cute. I was previously unfamiliar with this format but was glad to see your fine example. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest voting.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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This little poem is simple, yet cute. I was previously unfamiliar with this format but was glad to see your fine example. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest voting.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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HELLO SUSAN" Thank you for your review. I don't know that I didn't make it up. I never heard of this particular format myself. I thought that I was starting something fun and new. Nevertheless...I'm glad you liked it. You are appreciated. God bless you, Susan. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your children's poem, Rhonnie. The lines read well is this fun form. The art is a great choice. My only suggestion is to delete the numbers in front of the lines--leave them in your notes. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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I enjoyed your children's poem, Rhonnie. The lines read well is this fun form. The art is a great choice. My only suggestion is to delete the numbers in front of the lines--leave them in your notes. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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HELLO JAN: Thank you for your helpful review. Jan, I totally agree with you. I should have left the numbers in my notes. But I meant this to be a, "Practice poem," to illustrate how the poem works. But still...your way is the better way. Thank you. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.