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Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "The Mists of my Mind"
A word collage about my life.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Sharon Haiste
Your short poem speaks of memories from the past appearing out of the mist.
Nicely done.
I think of my memories as being in more of a fog, maybe lost forever.
Good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
Thank you very much. I deeply appreciate your review, comments and good luck wish!
Comment from
Mark D. R.
A truly gentle verse. Artwork and text are perfectly aligned.
Especially like the phrasing for your first line - so expressive!
Sadly, as we age, our short-term memories may disappear in the mist of our minds.
Good luck in the future voting.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
Thank you very much. Your review, comments, and good luck wish mean a lot!
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