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Dreams of Reality

Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "The Mists of my Mind"
A word collage about my life.

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Comment from Sharon Haiste
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Your short poem speaks of memories from the past appearing out of the mist.
Nicely done.
I think of my memories as being in more of a fog, maybe lost forever.
Good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much. I deeply appreciate your review, comments and good luck wish!
Comment from Mark D. R.
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A truly gentle verse. Artwork and text are perfectly aligned.

Especially like the phrasing for your first line - so expressive!

Sadly, as we age, our short-term memories may disappear in the mist of our minds.

Good luck in the future voting.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much. Your review, comments, and good luck wish mean a lot!